post season 4 finale ficlet

May 28, 2008 21:54

Title: Stuck in a moment
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: none, errors all mine as ever
Rating: teen
Disclaimer: Nothing owned, no monetary profit made.
Summary: Ryan and Taylor’s relationship.

Thanks to Kazfloyd for the bunny that started these
Berkeley, summer 2013, just prior to Seth and Summer's wedding

The quote is from 'Imzadi' by Peter David
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smc36 May 28 2008, 23:16:25 UTC
Oh wow - you really explained their "look" in the finale here!! You really did!
Awesome.

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:07:13 UTC
you really explained their "look" in the finale here

:) thank you, that look was the start of all this Ryan/Taylor. It's awfully cute!

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jassylou May 28 2008, 23:42:31 UTC
I love it when Ryan opens up,but when he takes charge after the words!!?. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

Was this really the finale.*shakes head* Pouts*
There's nothing sexier than a starry sky and the way you painted the picture was excellent.

I'd love to see the Cohens faces when they realise R/T are back together for good?. *nudge*

An incredible piece of writing Jane. Thankyou:)

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:11:40 UTC
Thank you:)
I doubt this is the end of these, they have a habit of breeding!

I'd love to see the Cohens faces when they realise R/T are back together for good

Well, it's a short one, but the link below will take you to that part,

Berkeley, 2013, Seth and Summer’s wedding
Beginnings

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ryanforever May 29 2008, 00:14:31 UTC
Fred this is wonderful. And I'm not even a Taylor fan. But you've aged her well and I think that maybe she is just what Ryan needs.

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:19:12 UTC
Thank you, it's neat to play with the characters
My daughter was rewatching season 4 yesterday, I think the Taylor ep bleed in. I had forgotten how much I did actually like her and so cute with Ryan, imho:)

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ryanforever May 29 2008, 09:21:36 UTC
I enjoyed her in the first few episodes of S4 but then it just seemed that she got too over the top for me. Or more importantly, I thought that she was too over the top for Ryan. She seemed like hard work and I thought that the gut had been through the mill and needed someone a little more low key. But to each his own. And your 'aged' Taylor is much more acceptable.

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fifimom May 29 2008, 05:03:19 UTC
Really wonderful, thanks.

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:19:36 UTC
You are most welcome:)

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chrisear May 29 2008, 06:14:19 UTC
great,thx

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fredsmith518 May 29 2008, 08:19:53 UTC
thank you:)

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