Completion of the Mothers' Day drabble

May 24, 2008 11:37

Title: Mothers’ Day drabbles, Kirsten’s pov, Regret and new promise
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: none, errors all mine as ever
Rating: tame
Disclaimer: Nothing owned, no monetary profit made.
Summary: 5 Drabbles around the theme of Mothers’ Day, borrowing lines from an episode each year. Original Ryan pov, apologizes to those who read before, but ( Read more... )

post season 4 finale fic, drabbles

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katwoman76 May 24 2008, 11:33:10 UTC
I teared up reading this. Not in a sad, but a happy way. This was beautiful, sweetie.
It's wonderful to see Kirsten view of the years as well. They work together so well with Ryan's POV before.
Thanks.

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 11:44:10 UTC
Thanks, cariad, sappy rules! but I'm not sad:D just busy

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helen_c May 24 2008, 12:11:08 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:46:43 UTC
I know - I need to write some angst, but the next one mithering at me is equally sappy! and your Paris photos are part of the inspiration - hmm, I can blame Helen?

thank you!

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helen_c May 25 2008, 10:05:13 UTC
heh, blame Helen all you want. :)

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fredsmith518 May 28 2008, 09:42:21 UTC
Thank you, the photos were very inspiring:)

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mel39 May 24 2008, 12:48:56 UTC
My eyes watered too, at the home made card. Lovely (though I must find a different word to use as I use that one too much!)

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:47:25 UTC
I can see that card, it's worrying!

Thank you

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jujuberry136 May 24 2008, 13:37:44 UTC
Awww. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:47:41 UTC
Thank you:)

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jassylou May 24 2008, 15:24:29 UTC
Great Jane!! Fluffity fluff is just what I needed today:)
It cheered me up.*nods*

Adore this line,
(It’s proof positive that he accepts his place in the family. His handprints are bracketed by Seth’s and Sophie’s, just as befits her middle child).
Thats a line we've all waited to see/hear for what seemed like forever.

It's the "ultimate" climatic words and should have been for the end of the show.
It's only one of the many reasons I find your writing "amazing" it really "works for me".

I'd really like more. Any update soon please?.....:)

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:49:22 UTC
Thank you, so sorry your day has been so difficult

Thank you for choosing my favourite lines.

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