Completion of the Mothers' Day drabble

May 24, 2008 11:37

Title: Mothers’ Day drabbles, Kirsten’s pov, Regret and new promise
Author: fredsmith518
Beta: none, errors all mine as ever
Rating: tame
Disclaimer: Nothing owned, no monetary profit made.
Summary: 5 Drabbles around the theme of Mothers’ Day, borrowing lines from an episode each year. Original Ryan pov, apologizes to those who read before, but ( Read more... )

post season 4 finale fic, drabbles

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bela1978 May 24 2008, 16:07:24 UTC
This is just beautiful...wow...Thanks a lot for sharing it!

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:49:34 UTC
Thank you

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jassylou May 24 2008, 16:21:19 UTC
PS: I really do love your shiny new icon. Smc is a real clever girl:)

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:50:01 UTC
She is, she made several

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60schic May 24 2008, 17:49:47 UTC
*sniff* So sweet and wonderful!
I know I've read the last part before, but is the rest all new, or am I really losing it?

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 17:53:12 UTC
Ryan's parts, in italics are from before, all Kirsten's parts, non italics are new, does that make sense?

Thank you

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60schic May 24 2008, 17:58:43 UTC
Yep. Just enough to make me know I've read parts...just enough new to make me question my sanity!

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 18:01:40 UTC
sorry about the sanity, we need all we can get!

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marsalka May 24 2008, 18:57:15 UTC
oh, you made me cry! but in the good way. I really like this companion piece, nice to see Kirsten's thoughts in response. "such is life, regrets and new promises" - what a terrific final line, a nice sum-up

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:50:46 UTC
Thank you
I love it when the last line gives the title!

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ctoan May 24 2008, 20:08:48 UTC
I like this follow-up. It's great to see Kirsten's thoughts on the occasions.

Like I just said to Mel, I love the Ryan-Kirsten early relationship and their uneasiness with each other. So this was perfect.

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fredsmith518 May 24 2008, 20:52:22 UTC
Thank you

You write lovely Ryan, Kirsten fic too. Still love Road trip especially. I think that was the first fic I read that concentrated exclusively on these two.

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