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sannea May 18 2007, 08:31:43 UTC
Oh this hurt so much *sniffle* Especially because it was so beautifully written.

I do hope the story gets rid of Derek at some point in the future? Coz he can't have Justin *pouts*

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freakykat May 18 2007, 21:53:08 UTC
I'm sorry. *pats* Thank you for the compliment. I will be addressing Peter in a later short. He won't be sticking around though he really isn't a bad dude or anything. lol.

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justinlovesart May 18 2007, 10:53:38 UTC
Ouch. Deliciously painful.

I realy, really like how you make Justin miss not only Brian, but the entire world, friends and life he left behind.

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freakykat May 18 2007, 21:58:17 UTC
Thank you! I do believe he would miss everything that he knew. I like where Justin seems to be heading in the shorts and later the fic. He's become his own man, and know what he wants and needs. He appreciates things like never before.

I have an easier time writing Brian becaus as complex as he is, I can point out what motivates him. Justin, I have a harder time pinning down and always feel a litte nervous trying to convey him.

Hopefully I can do him justice. :)

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originalrahrah May 18 2007, 12:31:06 UTC
this hurt.
it wasn't supposed to be this way.
sometimes i just want to shake justin.

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freakykat May 18 2007, 22:01:35 UTC
*frown*

*pets you*

I'm sorry. I hope you liked it though. Usually I shake my head at Justin and/or Brian but rarely do I want to shake them. Though it might do them some good if someone did.

*g*

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tgray May 18 2007, 13:40:49 UTC
This killed me! Beautiful in the way it was written, but the imagery and details made it so real. I could feel the pain for both of them.

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freakykat May 18 2007, 22:04:52 UTC
Oh thank you. Hopefully we can revive you for the next installment. I like details and feelings in fiction. I like being there and feeling it. It's hard to write when you have to basically put yourself in the characters shoes but the end results tend to come out well.

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wouldbedorothy May 18 2007, 17:18:28 UTC
Hey you! I love this as much as before! Still thinking of it whenever I hear a song pretty much! Love the title, lol. And, big surprise, everybody here is in pain! Like, physical pain! How do you do that? ;)

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freakykat May 18 2007, 22:06:25 UTC
Seriously we need to let other people have songs now lol. I'm glad you liked it even with the changes, small as they were.

I'm telling you I don't do anything. They do it themselves. I just write it.

*g*

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