Comments | freakykat: FIC: Breathe the Fall (QAF, B/J) Justin POV

freakykat

FIC: Breathe the Fall (QAF, B/J) Justin POV

May 18, 2007 00:26

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character: justin taylor, pairing: brian/justin, fandom: queer as folk, fanfic: series - it's only time

Comments 32

alasse May 18 2007, 19:21:54 UTC

Whoa... I'm totally breathless and with a suspicious ache in my chest... this was wonderful, a beautiful piece of heartache. You managed to convey Justin so well... and the way Brian acted that last time, his reactions... perfect. I can't wait to read more and the work these are leading up to, your writing is fantastic.
Hugs,
Arlad

freakykat May 18 2007, 22:10:36 UTC

Thank you for the lovely praise. I never feel I can do Justin any justice as a character so it's good to know that you felt him here. Brian is easier...though alot more painful to go through the writing process with. Justin always has hope, optimism...so there's always a bright side. Brian tends to turn from that so it's rougher to write that.

I so appreacite the compliments!

snowmore May 20 2007, 02:48:53 UTC

Beautifully sad. I like your attention to detail in their thoughts and feelings. I look forward to continuing this story.

freakykat May 20 2007, 07:48:40 UTC

Oh you're so sweet! Thank you. This mean alot coming from the person whose stories nearly do me in. I love the way you use words so thank you for that.

lost2mercy July 15 2007, 23:06:09 UTC

For some reason, I totally missed this instalment... This story is now officially my foolproof tearjerker. How do you do this? Trigger all my weak spots...

OUCH at the scene at the art showing. How painful for both Brian and Justin to face this situation there.

I love this story! Even if it's ripping out my heart.

freakykat July 16 2007, 05:51:06 UTC

*gives hankerchief*

That scene was extremely difficult to write as well. They really do go through a lot but in the end it will be good for them. I hope.

*pets*

It will be good.

jans_intentions August 22 2007, 02:37:10 UTC

Okay, I don't think I can read anymore until I know they are getting back together again. This is brilliant stuff but, it's pretty unbearable, especially mainlining it all at once.

freakykat August 22 2007, 18:58:48 UTC

I'm sooo sorry. I should totally have warned about the angst lol. It does get better and eventually it'll be really good...eventually.

Thank you so much for reading!

sandid August 26 2007, 13:32:13 UTC

*screams* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

He pulled back, cocking his head in Paul’s direction. “You better go meet your destiny, Sunshine.”

I'm going to need a case of Puff's.

Ok, going back for more.....

freakykat August 26 2007, 18:45:29 UTC

Okay you win the prize hand's down for the reaction to Paul lol...I'm sorry. I hope the Puff's help.

Oh dear. You're going to read more?!!