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qaf_fanatic May 8 2007, 11:00:59 UTC
why oh why, do you cause me such delicious pain? *wipes tear* they better be happy in the end! *my most menacing/playful glare* Oh Brian, i love you...........OH and you too freakykat!

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:07:29 UTC
I sorry. I agree they better be happy in the end! *hides from glare* I adore Brian so this one especially was hard to write being in his head and all. Awww...you're so sweet!

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sannea May 8 2007, 14:59:20 UTC
Oh this was every bit as heartbreaking as the actual episode *sniffle*

Very beautifully written.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:09:33 UTC
Omg! Thank you for that. I actually prepped by watching the episode right before I started to write this to get me in that place.

*hands Kleenex*

I'm so happy you liked it.

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lost2mercy May 8 2007, 15:49:03 UTC
*cries inconsolably* God, I don't know if Brian really had the insight to realise it, but it was obvious that that was exactly what he was doing and what was going on in his subconsciousness.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:14:12 UTC
Honestly I think he did have the insight. I believe he knew what he was doing and why. You can especially tell in their last scene when he's watching him pack or when he's handing him the drink, his face says it all.

I really do believe Brian grew up. He had to after what happened to them. I think he was ready for the commitment. It had to happen, the character evolving. Course Cowlip screwed it all up but whatever lol.

I'm sorry I made you cry though. *hugs* Hope it was a good kind though!

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:16:32 UTC
*puts on padding*

Ow! Your welcome lol!

That part did me in big time. I have the wierdest way of writing especially if it's in 1st or 2nd person, the little actress wanna be in me gets all into the scene and the characters and I end up crying...which isn't exactly condusive to writing but it gets the job done.

I don't blame you for the kick. :)

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originalrahrah May 8 2007, 16:36:29 UTC
wow!
'You knew now that’d you’d feel him…forever.'
warning: do not read this at work.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:18:05 UTC
Thank you! And yes great warning! Such a Brian and yet not a Brian thing to think lol...which would explain the "fucking lesbian" comment lol...

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