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roma79 May 8 2007, 17:03:03 UTC
beautiful *sniffle* just beautiful *sigh*

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:19:57 UTC
Oh thank you! *hugs* I know how you feel. *sigh*

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kari77 May 8 2007, 17:22:36 UTC
*sobs*

He would become someone. The person he was meant to be. The man you’d helped build, and that soothed a part of you. He would leave for the life he was destined to have.

Never knowing that he took yours with him. That everything you ever wanted would leave when he did.

Written so achingly beautiful.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:21:38 UTC
That is the best feedback. Thank you. I really felt for Brian in that last shot.

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justinlovesart May 8 2007, 20:01:09 UTC
You had done exactly what you’d said you didn’t want.

You’d sacrificed your life for his, calling it love.

I might I've died a little here. And I very rarely feel like this about Brian. Very emotional.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:24:42 UTC
Oh dont die! Then you can't read the rest :) Wow. I'm glad that the story did that. I respond with total emotion when it comes to Brian. I don't know why. He just gets to me. As does Justin of course.

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wouldbedorothy May 8 2007, 20:29:06 UTC
Hehe! Everyone's quoting you right and left! Can't decide which line or passage is the most "achingly beautiful" or causes the most "delicious pain"! Answer? All of them! lol ;) I love it!

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:25:46 UTC
Hi! Yes they are. I quite like the story myself.

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snowmore May 8 2007, 22:33:57 UTC
This is one of the most beautiful pieces I have read dealing with the separation they chose instead of the marriage. You have made me very emotional.

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freakykat May 9 2007, 04:26:47 UTC
You're such a sweetheart! Thank you for this. I'm happy (and hope) you enjoyed the emotional. :)

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