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[broken__records]

Title: if i let these days go by
Author: broken__records
Pairing: Jim/Pam
Word Count: 1284
Rating: K
Summary: Post season four angst. Spoiler through the finale. There’s a ‘Welcome Back, Pam!’ party the first Monday in September, after she gets back, after she spends a week off transitioning back to life in Scranton, after.

Comments

[fallenangels607]

Argh, why do you insist on breaking my heart?

This was beautiful. Not that that's any surprise, since it's you, but there was something about this one that struck a chord with me. Maybe that it was written in first-person, or that the dialogue was so sparse and angsty and perfect. It was just glorious.

[reasontoshine]

This was oddly realistic, and although it kinda breaks me, I truly like this idea. I could definitely see this happening in the show & it working in the show. Sometimes I wish they would go this route. As much as it would kill the fans, I would be one of the ones willing to stick through it to see how this would turn out. Great job! What can I say? Deep down, I love the angst.

[shornt]

Okay. Ouch. THIS IS WHAT SCARES ME ABOUT SEASON 5.

I mean, as always, your writing is great Erin... but it always makes me emo haha ♥

[mzrison]

nice. i do have a gut churn that this is how the season will start, just because the writers love to feed us fluff with a lil dried concrete mixed in for that biting reality flavor.

[lunapluvia]

Your prose is gorgeous as always, but I don't think Jim should wait. As much as Jim's question was a little selfish, her arrest of Jim's life is also.

Still breaking my heart.

[broken__records]

I'm not sure he should either, but I think that he would, you know? If she asked him to, if he thought she'd come back eventually.

And thank you. :)

[lunapluvia]

That's an acceptable answer. ;) I just don't know how I feel about Pam wanting that at all. I mean, I'm sure she could, but personally, on a "I'm invested in this couple" way.