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Jun 23, 2008 20:29

Title: if i let these days go by
Author: broken__records
Pairing: Jim/Pam
Word Count: 1284
Rating: K
Summary: Post season four angst. Spoiler through the finale. There’s a ‘Welcome Back, Pam!’ party the first Monday in September, after she gets back, after she spends a week off transitioning back to life in Scranton, after.

then i'll be a monk )

the office, jim/pam

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bebitched June 25 2008, 17:44:50 UTC
Okay, my heart? In my stomach. And infuriatingly broken into a million pieces. How do you do that? Just... guh. Fabulous work, as always. I can see this happening (sadly) because there's one of two ways this Pam moving to the city thing could go: one, she realizes the height of it all is too much for her, or at least not what she wants, or two, she can't go back to the way things were. And I'm not sure which one I'd prefer. But back to the fic, every little detail was so perfect and delicately placed there with a purpose. Well done!

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purpleeater1 June 28 2008, 05:31:04 UTC
wow.
that's all i can say.
and also i can say it broke my heart.

great job.

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everycliche131 July 6 2008, 04:20:04 UTC
oh my god i feel like crying.
wow. i never thought jim would give up so easily!!! [until i read the last three words].
wow -- i like his character, though. moody and whatnot. what a great way to spin it!
loveee your work!!!

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cebby July 20 2008, 10:53:07 UTC
Gorgeous. Simply gorgeous.

And I can't get past this: "We couldn’t go back to being friends. We were never really friends to begin with. There was always something else beneath that veneer. And I knew it was all or nothing for us." without tearing up because it describes them so well and also strikes a personal chord right now.

I love these vignettes you pen so beautifully.

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