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[frabjouslinz]

A writing group buddy heard me read this bit aloud, and said "You're a f***ing good writer," after I was done. I was really flattered. Especially since I felt (and still feel, although it is edited a little) that this is too exposition-y and there's not enough, um, something. I'm not going to explain the backstory, because this is the middle of the

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[shaolingrrl]

You're a f***ing good writer.

[frabjouslinz]

Oh, you. But thanx.

[mistymarshall]

awesome...I like that line too :)

[frabjouslinz]

It is kind of, er, resonating, isn't it? I think I'll take out the "What" and the second "was." Still editing....