LJ Idol, Season 9, Week 8: Yes, and

[fourzoas]

and he went into the sea, to the deep mother-water to breathe again. Safe, now, he thought, and the cooling waves lapped over the toes he dangled Over the boat's side. Port? Yes

Comments

[eternal_ot]

I kinda hoped for more...:)..but beautiful imagery and good descriptions!

[halfshellvenus]

So evocative. I'm still wondering a little bit exactly what happened, but I liked the feel of this very much.

[whipchick]

Really love your use of language and images here. It's nice to see someone working with more sophisticated text, thank you!

[kajel]

Beautiful imagery. Nicely done.

[ohelectricshock]

This is so sensual and disorienting at the same time. Loved this.