Fanfiction, Senses: Smell II
Title: Under the veil
Author: Fourangers
Genre: weird story. That counts as a genre, right? Ok, and there’s drama.
Rating: M
Word Count: 8.000
Warnings: I think that the rating speaks by itself…:P NaruSasu lime.
Summary: When your resolute mind is able to block the desires of your heart, there’s only one way to relieve the passion. Surround yourself ( Read more... )
Author: Fourangers
Genre: weird story. That counts as a genre, right? Ok, and there’s drama.
Rating: M
Word Count: 8.000
Warnings: I think that the rating speaks by itself…:P NaruSasu lime.
Summary: When your resolute mind is able to block the desires of your heart, there’s only one way to relieve the passion. Surround yourself ( Read more... )
Comments 10
I usually don't like NaruSasu (I am SasuNaru fangirl actually) but I really liked how you protrayed Sasuke in this story. It's not exactly the usual Sasuke that we read about (you know, agressive, angsty, grumpy, dominant) but I liked it especially towards the end when Sasuke said he was willing to be second in Naruto's heart for once. I was like.. AWWWWWWWWW.. SASU CHAN!
On the other hand, I loved your depiction of Naruto. It was totally IC and the bit abt him using shadow clones to cover for himself made me laugh. And yes, how he still pursued Sasuke (albeit now in the emotional sense) was sweet. =)
Nice story :D
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I usually write SasuNaruSasu, but this time I gave an exception since I generally don't mind putting divisions between them. I'm glad that you liked my portray of Sasuke! :D I think that Sasuke is someone able to relinquish for Naru's sake, since he sacrificed his life to Naruto in Haku's arc.
Thank you also for saying that Naru is IC! :D This is the best compliment that a fanfic writer would receive, in my opinion. :D
I wrote a SasuNaru fic in Senses: Sight, if you want, check it out! (but beware, it's kinda angsty. :P)
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oh~~~ I don't know what to say. I loved it
<3
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But...thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it. :D
(shameless advertisement: wrote a new "Sense") XD
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Sasuke's behaviour was kinda hreat-breaking, but completely understandable. I mean it was obvious enough that he had feelings for Naruto and Naruto was married and was hokage and no one else liked Sasuke so... :(
“C’mon…Sasuke. There’s no need to be this formal to me you know…I called all the guards off, you don’t need to fake all this useless things…”Naruto trying to hard ( ... )
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Yeah....the first part was more like "I'm tired of reading Hokage!Naruto fics where Naruto doesn't do his work, he's only Sasuke's bitch or he's too busy having sex with Sasuke on the Hokage's desk" reaction rather than...anything. >_> Doesn't they realize how heavy is the task of taking care of a city?
I also liked the part where he still tries to protect Sasuke, because in a way he's still the same Naruto but he's more mature to negotiate with the councils. :3
Sasuke's behaviour was kinda hreat-breaking, but completely understandable. I mean it was obvious enough that he had feelings for Naruto and Naruto was married and was hokage and no one else liked Sasuke ( ... )
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I also liked the part where he still tries to protect Sasuke, because in a way he's still the same Naruto but he's more mature to negotiate with the councils. :3
Urgh yeah a lot of those fics around. >.> Even though I can completely see Naruto using bunshins for some smaller stuff. XD
And yes I really liked the negotiations with the council! He was still Naruto but a more grown-up Naruto. *smile*
Yeah....poor Sasuke :( But initially, I wanted to put the reason for Sasuke to do that, is because he finally realized that Naruto is the bringer of peace, and he finally understood Itachi's teaching. That's why he knew that if Naruto concentrate on him again, he wouldn't be able to concentrate on bringing peace in the ninja world ( ... )
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Think the sexiest lines are when Sasuke finally calls Naruto by his name :heart:. Your [mild] smut is just fine XDD.
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