(for shrekaisoo) I Remember You

[forkadionly]

For: shrekaisoo

Title: i remember you
Genre angst and fluff
Rating: PG
Side Pairings (if any): a lot of baekxing
Word Count: 6,500 words
Summary: Jongin knew he had to find someone, but his memory was not willing to cooperate with him.
Author's Note: this is the longest fic i have ever written in my whole life, also, shrekaisoo, i hope this meets your

Comments

[shrekaisoo]

!!!!! oMG BRB

[shrekaisoo]

omg i posted a long comment but it isn't here I' M

edit: i'm going to try and remember what i wrote in the comment rip and rewrite /cries

edit edit: the comment posted late ?? but i deleted it omg im a mess

[shrekaisoo]

anyway i feel personally attacked by lj for deleting my comment sighs here goes !!!

HI AUTHOR! ♡♡♡ sorry i'm being a tad bit emo hehe anyway!! hELLO

i screamed when i saw my username i was so excited and then i saw the title of the fic and i knew exactly which prompt you had chosen to write and i was shook from the start because tHAT was a super tough prompt!! i was really surprised you chose that one actually and i really commend you for it because it! was! not! easy!! (legit my reaction was OOOOOOOH THEY DIDN'T OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH THEY DID !!!!)

anyway i really liked how you took my prompt and turned it into your own unique story! it was a very good read and i enjoyed it a lot hehe ♡ i was actually expecting a lot more angst but as i kept reading i just really really wanted kaisoo to have the happy ending they deserve :(( and spoiler alert theY DID AMEN ! and omg if i was to tag myself as a line from this fic i would totally be “100 reasons why I love Kim Jongin with all my heart” bc SAME and kyungsoo is such a cheesy cute

[shrekaisoo]

HAH i came back to say that i REALLY liked the last line a lot, i forgot to mention this in my previous comment, but i think it's quite an evocative line. i feel like it gives you a sense of hope y'know? and it gives a great message that love goes beyond memory, 'cos new memories can be made! i love that!

also, you asked for writing advice as well.. i think to start off with, you can read extensively (not just fanfics but books, etc). it's a great way to expand your vocabulary and teach you how to immerse your readers in your story. also, reading up on grammar and literary techniques is good too. there's plenty of blogs and websites that explain these in great detail. if you're in uni/high school, you could perhaps try joining a writing club if there is one? and also, ted-ed has a lot of great videos on this topic~ (these ones i recommend: this and this) and just keep at it! keep writing lots! :))

and of course we can talk after reveals ♡♡

[jonginspuppy]

I was afraid reading this story honestly lol.
The flashbacks were so sweet. Seeing their happy moments.
I really love the ending oh god. After months of staying in the dark, they meet again and forgive each other and still love each other.

[akigia]

TT the ending got me all soft! iM' so happy they get to meet again and forgive each other,...their love is strong ;; and baekxing is seriously an underrated pairing!