(for shrekaisoo) I Remember You

[forkadionly]

For: shrekaisoo

Title: i remember you
Genre angst and fluff
Rating: PG
Side Pairings (if any): a lot of baekxing
Word Count: 6,500 words
Summary: Jongin knew he had to find someone, but his memory was not willing to cooperate with him.
Author's Note: this is the longest fic i have ever written in my whole life, also, shrekaisoo, i hope this meets your

Comments

[shrekaisoo]

anyway i feel personally attacked by lj for deleting my comment sighs here goes !!!

HI AUTHOR! ♡♡♡ sorry i'm being a tad bit emo hehe anyway!! hELLO

i screamed when i saw my username i was so excited and then i saw the title of the fic and i knew exactly which prompt you had chosen to write and i was shook from the start because tHAT was a super tough prompt!! i was really surprised you chose that one actually and i really commend you for it because it! was! not! easy!! (legit my reaction was OOOOOOOH THEY DIDN'T OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH THEY DID !!!!)

anyway i really liked how you took my prompt and turned it into your own unique story! it was a very good read and i enjoyed it a lot hehe ♡ i was actually expecting a lot more angst but as i kept reading i just really really wanted kaisoo to have the happy ending they deserve :(( and spoiler alert theY DID AMEN ! and omg if i was to tag myself as a line from this fic i would totally be “100 reasons why I love Kim Jongin with all my heart” bc SAME and kyungsoo is such a cheesy cute boyfriend aW ! i liked was how much you made my heart hurt every time jongin had a flashback and couldn't really remember kyungsoo iw as :( but also :) bc i like pain hehe and oh! one thing i really liked was the process of jongin gradually remember all these sort of small details and it was super subtle but you really wrote it well through the changes in his mannerisms and attitude i rly liked that!!! good job ^^

AND HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMYGOD THE AMOUNT OF BAEKXING IN THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY DISGUSTING BUT I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!! i loved how you wrote them, as a cute lil contrast to the absent kaisoo and it made my heart sting a little bit but !! baekxing are so so cute and omg you delivered :") and i seriously laughed at this: “Why do I have the feeling that the one running is Baekhyun?” HAHA trust baekxing :")

but my all time fave line from the fic would be: Hearing Zhang Yixing raise his voice town to such authority made Baekhyun melt into a pile of goo. because same baek, same.

and on a side note, there were a few grammatical/spelling errors throughout the fic, but nothing that hindered my enjoyment of reading it! i think there is room for improvement so i hope you continue to write and i can't wait to see what else is in store from you!

thank you so so much for writing this. i know this was a had prompt but you did really well! and you said this is your longest fic by far? i'm proud of you for writing this much!! thank you once again!!!