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Black Bird - Chapter Eleven

Sep 23, 2014 13:34

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zacgirl1 September 23 2014, 17:20:55 UTC

I still have to catch up with this story, which I will soon. But I wanted to wish you happy birthday. So...

Happy Birthday Sarah! I hope you have a wonderful day! 🎁🎉🎈🎊🎂

ammiebw September 24 2014, 07:47:45 UTC

Well that was all a bit adorable. Poor Jordan is probably not going to be keen on going up high in a balloon. I guess he'll just have to snuggle up to Isaac ;)

Happy Birthday by the way! :)

malfunkshon September 27 2014, 16:43:13 UTC

Oh my God ( ... )

withasmile87 October 4 2014, 15:33:48 UTC

Well since I am scared of heights I'd probably faint then and there. I hope Jordan is at least better equipped than that lol.

eleflowerpot October 4 2014, 16:03:57 UTC

Wow! I was certainly not expecting that to be the surprise! (I went in on one with my dad for his 60th birthday and it was incredible, although obv I'm not afraid of heights like Jordan...)

I love the narrative of Jordan as he wonders about Isaac and how he'll react to his house etc. Also, his love for his sister and niece is beautiful.

As always a beautiful chapter.