Black Bird - Chapter Eleven

Sep 23, 2014 13:34


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tondada January 30 2015, 12:04:52 UTC

I've really missed the way you use your words to create a mental image of everything in the scene. It's really quite amazing!

The excitement of this date is palpable for sure! I hope Jordan will fare well with any anxiety about going so high in the balloon. It is such a romantic and probably once in a lifetime experience. I'm sure Isaac will be a very calming presence for him.

I, like Jordan, felt the little pang of sadness when the went past his beloved carnival. :( I bet it will be a beautiful sight from above though.

Excited for more!

Love you! Xoxo

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