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forever_smilez

Stolen

Sep 29, 2009 15:38

Stolen.
One shot 1,160 Words.
Jaesu.
Angst.
R.
Written for jaesu_challenge with the prompt 'The way you (never) looked at me' and this quote:
{"You know, I used to spend every day thinking about you and dreaming about you. And every time you walked by I lost myself. Do you know what that feels like? You couldn’t possibly know what it feels like to have that person ( Read more... )

length: one shot, genre: angst, rating: r, pairing: jaesu

Comments 22

lammyellaxxx September 29 2009, 17:00:28 UTC

Oh poor Su. :(
This is so sad... I feel like bricking Jae's pretty face for doing that to Junsu especially when he's already with someone.
One-sided Jaesu just so depressing!
I demand you write me fluff next time.x (I want it all sugary and sweet hehe)
Great read... Maybe a sequel???

Xxx (^•^)

forever_smilez September 30 2009, 21:22:41 UTC

Sorry Su :( I know it's sad, but I felt the role of the bad guy fitted Jae more than Su.
Sequel? Maybe...XD
And fluff? I'll try lol
Thank you for the comment! xxx

xiahwase September 29 2009, 20:08:14 UTC

my heart =/

♥

forever_smilez September 30 2009, 21:24:12 UTC

*tries to mend heart* I'm sorry...
The prompt was asking for angst to be written lol.
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

marieluna September 29 2009, 20:41:42 UTC

"Jaejoong’s stumbling again, Soju bottle in hand he finds himself back on familiar grounds.

He knocks, No answer.

He knocks again and waits a little longer. Silence.

Holding onto the metal railings, he drags himself up onto the roof.

Sitting on the edge, maybe if he waits...

Moonlight illuminating him, only him, just him."

That last part didn't feel like one sided... ç__ç you broke my heart

forever_smilez September 30 2009, 21:25:53 UTC

*tries to mend you heart too* XD Sorry :(
Yes, I'm glad you noticed :) Jae might feel something too...
Thanks for reading and commenting ^^

kimbuibui September 30 2009, 11:21:44 UTC

it's been a whlie since i read something this good.

thank you writing this and i'm definitely gonna mem it. XD

♥

forever_smilez September 30 2009, 21:28:44 UTC

aww thank you so much :)
And your icon is ♥

shinzara October 1 2009, 14:23:25 UTC

jae's a jerk jae's a jerk jae's a jerk.
Why would he let Su leave T^T!
That fool! *heart/breaks*

loved your oneshot <3

forever_smilez October 2 2009, 19:40:18 UTC

I know, Jae realised too late? I don't know, now I want to write in his point of view...
*Tries to mend your broken heart* ^^
Thanks for reading and commenting :D <3