[On-Going] Dodging Bullets: 05

[forever_smilez]

Title: Dodging Bullets
Author: forever_smilez 
Length: Chaptered [5/?] 2,016 words
Pairings: Major: Junsu/Jaejoong | Junsu/Yunho Minor: Yoochun/Liyin | Hankyung/Yeonhee
Rating: PG
Genre: Angst, Romance.
Summary: Boxer vs Cop. Drugs vs Guns. Yunho vs Jaejoong. Winner takes all, Kim Junsu, his love, his heart, his world.
A/N: Enjoy! ♥
Previous Chapters: Prologue|One

Comments

[lammyellaxxx]

yippie!!!!update!
ohhhh the jaesu sexual tension...its bubbling along nicely~ XD
Yunho is such a jealous twat who doesn't know who he's dealing with! lol of all guys to threaten, he goes and threaten Jae-the cop!!! idiot or what??? ^^
it seems Junsu's given up on alot of personal dreams by being with yunho, like his dancing...

i totally dig your Jae...he's so ????gah!!! and extra points for not taking yunho's threats seriously! haha
more pls!!!
♥♥♥

[forever_smilez]

Right! Yunho loves to play with fire. and fire he will get! Haha!
My Jae is so much love! My fav to write :D I've love that 'nothing's gonna scare me' attitude :P

Thank you hun! ♥♥♥♥♥

[bivi_vivi]

the jaesu fangirl in me is jumping for joy <3

[forever_smilez]

yay!! Such a joy to write XD
Thank you for commenting lovey! ♥

[emhilshi]

Their dance practice there reminds me of that video i saw of them dancing to intoxicati0n! Jaesu is love, thank you very much for updating.

[forever_smilez]

I love that little clips. Ahh Jaesu! How I love you loads :P
Thank you for reading and commenting darling! ♥

[tasniatvxq]

AIGAKFSKYSFSFOY. :DDDD an UPDATEE! *underwater dances with you*
ah gosh. ah goodness. oh my god sun. LOL.
Waaahhhh, jaesu are so compatible... So meant to be... *dies* psshh, yunho should get his act together that little b-word! :(

Ah. I still have a lot of your writings to stalk LOL. and omg, we have parents evening soon - waaah - and my English teacher realised we were missing some of our coursework - a fiction essay. And she said I could do it on dbsk :DD YEAAHHHH BAAABBYY. Lol totally irrelevant but I dunno. I like telling you random things my shark buddy <33

[forever_smilez]

*dances*
I LOVE Jaesu, but have to keep my bias on a tight leash to give hosu a chance at least :P LMAO!

You can *squeals* I wish I could've done something dbsk related for my coursework, at least I'll have a good chance of passing haha. Good luck, you'll ace it! LOL you can tell me whatever you want :) ♥♥

[tasniatvxq]

Do you like yoosu at all? ;D it's my other OTP loll but I dno I felt that jaesu was so
much more WHEIGOJELW <33 oh I'm so articulate :3

haha of course I'll ace it LOL I dno... But I have a maths exam on Monday so I can't/shouldn't stalk the rest of your one-shots and stuff D8 BUUUUT I shall stalk your livejournal in spirit form ;DD and tooth fairy form ;DDDDD AND shark form!! 8DDDD

LOL I'M SO FUNNY

[forever_smilez]

Yoosu are my second OTP too :D The reason why Jaesu are no.1 is because they are so subtle and totally different to the other pairings. They seem more real, whilst the others are more obvious and in your face love haha! But yeah JAESU!! ♥ If you have time, read my fic, 'behind closed doors', that's my interpretation of them :D

Of course you will and you will your maths exams too. Good luck! Don't stalk anymore of my stuff and revise~

LMAO @ LOL I'M SO FUNNY You indeed is very funny! :P

[kathlynwolf]

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By right back. I must keep my thoughts straight...

[kathlynwolf]

For a moment there I thought that I'm going to be incoherent... And I was ready to start typing something like 'FDSFDGDSSFASADFAF*gorgeous*DSAFGDFGSASFADSD'. Luckly I stopped myself, because for sure this deserves something more that this.

So... Firstly, I wanted to point out one mistake I found there:
The smiled was so forced I believe that you meant

[forever_smilez]

I just came home from a fairly long day at work and then this was in my inbox. Totally cheered me up, it's made my night so much better :)

Thanks for pointing that out *goes and changes :D

I'm really glad you like how slow this fic is going in terms of detail and it having no holes. I guess some people don't, hence the decline in readers :( BUT i will try my very best to stick to it and although the lack of readers make me so demotivated to carry on :( I will continue as comment like those posted (and this :D) are worth a million reasons to carry on till the end.

I really like to keep my characters as realistic as I can, otherwise it'll turn into a joke and becomes something fluffy and pointless (like most of my other fics lol). Yay that you like everyone, including Yunho ^^

Ahh as much as I adore yoosu, they have plenty of fans hehe. Give Jaesu more love and jump on our ship :P

Your comment means a lot, thank you so so much hun! ♥♥♥♥

[kathlynwolf]

You're welcome, Dear ^_^

And I can promise you that I'll do my best to cheer you up with this kind of comments as long as you'll be writing this ;)

And yes, it's true that YooSu has a lot of fans XD But I must say that I really love EVERY couple with Su in it, probably because he's my biggest bias ever. EVER XD