Revolve- Heroes Fanfiction -Heroes15 Challenge

[force_oblique]

Title: Revolve
Author: force-oblique
Rating: G
Disclaimer:Obviously , i dont own anything! :P
Characters/Pairings: Eden McCain /A bit of Sylar
Table/Prompt: Table #7, "Revolve"
Word Count: 1669
Summary: Eden's Final moments trying to rid the world of the threat that is "Sylar"
Author's Notes: Not really spoilerish..Only if you haven't seen 1x11. Really my first

Comments

[crumblingmoon]

Wow. That was really good. I loved it, and I don't even watch Heroes! I especially like the ending, that last line, 'The earth would still revolve around the sun.' great stuff. =)

[force_oblique]

Oh, really? You liked it? Thankies soooo much!!!!
When i thought of the word "revolve" immediately i had the idea of"life going on" but someone being left behind one way or the other. And since i really liked Eden McCain as a character and her way of "going down" was magnificent i wanted to try to make this story about her! :)

[michelsita]

This was beautiful!
I love it, really, it left me stunned! I believe Eden was a character that we should have seen more, her nature was fascinating.
Everything seems so clear to her on the end, her final resolution, she tried to kill him but she couldn't and now she wasn't going to make it easier for him, and the Earth was still rotating without her.
Thanks for this glimpse to Eden's head, a perfect portrait.

[force_oblique]

Thank you so much!!! I totally aqgree with you. I really liked Eden's character, i believed she came a long way throughout the show. She became a better person and found a purpose though in the beginiing she was just a kid gone wild!
Exactly. Trying to make things harder for him in any way she could, was the only thing that could comfort her when she realized that she wouldnt be able to kill him.

[ghost_goodthing]

Okay, first off.:WOW! I loved it. There isn't a single line or word use I don't like. I should say love 'cause that's a perfect word for what I think

[force_oblique]

Wow! Thanks!!! I wasnt expecting such an enthusiastic response but i am really happy and thankful for it! :)
I never thought that it would speak to you in that way but i am thrilled it did.
I really liked Eden, she had a lot of potential and the way she was depicted in the show..so shortly didnt do her character justice. She would have been a really cool character to watch.
That was my intention exactly. To have you sympathize with her and make you wonder about her. Hehe, Yay for me! I did it!
Thanks a lot for your kind words. They were really encouraging and inspiring.
Actually i am currently finishing my next story for the challenge,focusing on the word "Elusive". A Sylar story with a twist~ I will probably send it to you to beta it if you dont mind. I am mostly focusing on short fiction now because that is all i have time for.

I am hoping for your muse to visit you again because i love reading and i wouldnt miss it!

[threthiel9]

Wow. Just... WOW. I was never a big Eden fan until semi-recently, the way you write her, with the... and the... but this is just... I'm seriously at a loss for words. Again wow. You rock.

[force_oblique]

Awwww! Thanks so much!!! I appreciate your comments!!! Especially since English is not my native language..it means a lot to me! :)

[force_oblique]

And i so love your icon!!!!!!

[danniisupernova]

Hey! I just finished reading this (very very good by the way) and would like to invite you to join eden_sylar. We're new and don't have a lot of memebers right now. We don't just deal in Eden/Sylar fic, we also except singular character fic. :) Please think about it!

[force_oblique]

Thankies!!!!
Oh coolies! A Eden/Sylar community~~!
I thought it was only me!!Yay!!
I am definately joining and helping promote it!! I put a button up in my userinfo! :)