Comments | footshooter: If only I could do nothing...

footshooter

If only I could do nothing...

Sep 14, 2010 01:43

BBC MERLIN
Characters: Merlin, Morgana, Arthur.
Warnings: Spoilers. Pay heed to that.
Disclaimer: Merlin isn't mine.
A/N: I'm not sure how I feel about this, I never liked writing in first person, but Merlin's voice just wouldn't let me be. Anyway, I did say I'd get back to angst eventually, didn't I?

( Some secrets are harder to bear alone than others. )

morgana, merlin, bbc merlin

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buffyangellvr23 September 14 2010, 04:21:22 UTC

nice work :)

footshooter September 14 2010, 08:29:42 UTC

Thanks!

archaeologist_d September 14 2010, 20:29:39 UTC

Oh, that was great. The last line was so chilling. Well done.

footshooter September 15 2010, 09:36:43 UTC

Thank you!

cherish4 September 15 2010, 19:21:31 UTC

Oh hun...

*wibble*

I feel Merlin's pain and the way you've captured the changes in Morgana here, are heartbreaking:

This wasn’t Morgana. I don’t know who was standing in front of me, and I didn’t want to know her. But the Lady Morgana was lost, gone forever.

*wibbles again*

footshooter September 15 2010, 19:24:56 UTC

Aww, thank you!

I like posting in Merlin's POV.

owensheart November 14 2010, 09:19:54 UTC

Don't hink I commented on this before but great fic.

My heart breaks for Merlin.

footshooter November 14 2010, 12:05:38 UTC

Thank you!!