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3 drabbles; Real Madrid

Jul 06, 2007 11:44

Title: Impression
Author: wispykitty
Team of Choice: Real Madrid
Prompt: Score
Character: None mentioned, but I wrote it thinking of Guti (who is thinking of Sergio and David)
Rating: PG
( They have something special and it's easy to be seen. )

team of choice: real madrid, author: wispykitty, character: raul, character: fabio capello, character: ramon calderon, character: guti, prompt: score

Comments 10

lhuneldaiel July 6 2007, 18:36:58 UTC

I love love love the first one. Very vivid, a well painted picture in just 100 words!
The second one is very powerful.I really doubted Capello during those awful winter months, but he redeemed himself. Calderón...I have no respect for.
The third one is just so sweet.

Great job!

wispykitty July 6 2007, 19:42:43 UTC

Thank you! I had my doubts about Capello too, but man did he ever get things sorted out. Sometimes a coach has to do some sketchy things to make his vision a reality that works. Calderon should be fired instead of Capello. God I hate him! >:(

txorakeriak July 6 2007, 19:18:18 UTC

*sniffles* The first one is just heartbreaking. Poor Guti.

I loved the subtext in the second one. The part in italics is just perfect and intense. And dammit, I didn't want Capello to leave, either. :(

And awwwwww - the last one is so cute, especially the last line.

I'm so glad your muses are back, because your drabbles are always so awesome! *glomps*

wispykitty July 6 2007, 19:40:47 UTC

Yeah I just can't help but write emo!Guti. *pets him* I should write him something really happy at some point. The Guti!muse would totally appreciate it, I bet. But he's not demanding, hence why I haven't done that yet. :)

Glad you got the intense feeling of the second one. As soon as the line "settle a score" came up I was instantly drawn to Capello. *lol* I'm going to miss his scary blow-ups during games a lot! :(

And the last one is such an adorable image. I still need that icon of them. Next week, after my brother goes home, I should have more time. I would like to devote an entire night to icons! Especially new Bayern ones with the new boys. <3

And yay indeed for the return of my muses! I guess finding that apartment did the trick after all. :)

txorakeriak July 6 2007, 22:16:12 UTC

I think the Guti!muse should start being a bit more demanding. XD I shall have a talk with him. :D (He deserves to be happy, so it's all for his own good!)

I'm going to miss his scary blow-ups during games a lot! :(
*sniffles* Oh yes... :(

I would like to devote an entire night to icons! Especially new Bayern ones with the new boys. <3
OMG! That sounds so awesome! Will you make me a pretty icon of Sosa? I'll reward you with the press conference, if you're interested! *makes Bambi eyes at you*

I still need to read that post you wrote about the apartment. Damn, I'm so slow. *feels bad* But I swear it will be done!

wispykitty July 10 2007, 18:57:21 UTC

Guti!muse does need to stick up for his happiness a bit more. I think he just realizes how much I love writing angsty characters, so he's willing to sacrifice some happy moments to make me happy. What a giving guy!! He's such a sweet muse. ;)

I'll totally make you a Sosa icon! :D And yes press conference!!

And don't worry about getting to the posts. I've been slacking a lot myself lately, just been too busy to respond to everything. I know you still care even if you take weeks to respond to something. ;) *hugs*

rrr_nightingale July 14 2007, 14:58:42 UTC

Oh my!!! Your cute drabbles!!! Thanks! They are absolutely not like each other.
The first one is very light and at the same time angsty, I can understand Guti's feelings very well.
The second one is just love!!! Thank you for writing it, becausem - why not? I like to see the situation like this, it's more than believable. I like the metaphor (if it can be called so, I haven't studied literature for too long%))))) about Calderon's iron fist that will come smashing back down on him one day!
And I totally love the third one because of Guti. And because of Raul too... You know, usually in fics that I read before Guti was the stronger (and maybe even more cynical?) one, and suddenly I see that he can be nervous, unsure of himself... he so sweet when he's like this%) And Raul is a real captain when he's calm and steady. I don't know if I speak with clarity%) The moment when Guti cuts his finger is very touching. *melts*

rrr_nightingale July 14 2007, 16:02:18 UTC

*I just can't help but translate the third one into Russian, if you don't mind.... please? :) I'll give you the link for sure*

wispykitty July 16 2007, 17:44:06 UTC

Of course you can! I'm glad you like them so much to want to translate. :D

rrr_nightingale July 23 2007, 11:04:41 UTC

I'm happy you write such attractive drabbles too))))) Here it is :)