Three drabbles; Arsenal

Apr 17, 2008 21:50

Umbrella Disclaimer: ...I wish this was true, and also that I had video evidence, but - alas! - wishing doesn't make it so.

7.
Title: Easy
Author: hallucinogenia
Team of Choice: Arsenal
Prompt: [when you were young]
Pairing: David Villa/David Silva/Joaquín Sánchez
Rating: PG-13

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character: david villa, prompt: [when you were young], character: david silva, author: hallucinogenia, character: joaquin sanchez, team of choice: arsenal

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aviz April 18 2008, 10:48:06 UTC
I just love the characterization of Joaquin. It's universally agreed upon that he's an orange-haired, glowy-colour and near demonic-eyed sex maniac. Although I'm still pretty mystified as to why everyone in fandom believes this, you're the only person who writes it like he's human. That he's GENUINELY a porny freak...no half-arsed lame battering about hinting without justification that this guy actually can have deep feelings. I'm sure he does yeah, and I'm sure you think so too, but it's just that I can't tolerate people who try to tell things (especially human beings) in a lazy way and expect readers to Get It.

My god, THREE drabbles on three footballers whom I have an abiding interest in. I've always thought that all three of them have extremely engaging personalities, even in real life. I came on this com just to see if I could write anything for the prompt, and then I saw these! Thank you so much for giving me something to dream about tonight. :)

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hallucinogenia April 18 2008, 11:51:04 UTC
I...just don't know where to start with this comment! Thank you and you're welcome ( ... )

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bustedflush April 18 2008, 19:21:17 UTC
I think my favorite is the first, I love the "seduction" (such as it is) of David, and the sense of anticipation (as well as the fairly frank manipulation).

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hallucinogenia April 18 2008, 20:37:26 UTC
Ha, such as it is. I'm glad you liked it, thank you.

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