FanFic: Take my hand, set me free.

[folie_lex]

Title: Take my hand, set me free.
Characters-Pairings: Erica, Hobbes, Sid - Erica/Hobbes
Rating: PG
Summary: “Any type of physical contact they’ve ever had usually he has initiated (and it’s rarely ever under pleasant circumstances), or it involves her punching him in the face (which is not pleasant, period).”
Disclaimer: I obviously DO NOT own

Comments

[lormats]

maaaaw I love it, cuz it's totally them, who they are and ♥

I went them to have the chance for a real relationship damn it!

[folie_lex]

Aw! Thanks so much *hugs*

I went them to have the chance for a real relationship damn it!
ME TOO!! They're both so broken they totally deserve it!

[quirkysmuse]

Omigosh that was awesome! I loved it, especially the way you wrote Sid, and of course, you have Erica and Hobbes down perfectly! Wonderful job.

[folie_lex]

Thanks muchly *blushes*

you have Erica and Hobbes down perfectly!

That is absolutelly lovely to hear. I was a little worried they'd come off sounding OOC...
Sid was definitelly much easier to write. Glad you enjoyed him.

[eternal_moonie]

Absolutely LOVE it!

[folie_lex]

So glad to hear it! :D

[shikabane_mai]

He’s noticed she is generally overly affectionate... with everyone else that is.
This is so true! Which is why I love it so much whenever they touch because those touches are actually significant!

I loved the visual of Hobbes wrapping his arm around Erica’s waist. Something very sexy about it. ;D

The setting this time, is textbook them.
And he hates it.
So he wipes off the smirk, he swallows the sarcasm (and it tastes so bitter) and sits back with his guns, starting from the top: Ignoring her.
Awww, Hobbes. This story being from his POV is so nice.

And she is half way out the door but she reciprocates, both the smile and the look, and it is such an affectionate gesture, that he finds it a little hard to breathe.Omg, this sentence. My favourite part of the fic! I loved the way you described how it’s so different and how it takes his breath away because it felt so real and so in character

[folie_lex]

Thank you for the lovely comment :)

You should definitely write more Hobbes/Erica in the future! :D
I generally don't write a lot, cause I'm not really that good, and I hardly have the patience for it, but I was in the hospital bored to death and this just kinda came out of that...

I loved the visual of Hobbes wrapping his arm around Erica’s waist. Something very sexy about it. ;D
Believe it or not, I'd actually written this about 4 weeks ago...
Glad to see it turned out exactly how I'd imagined it ;)
(and I mean exactly)

Omg, this sentence. My favourite part of the fic! I loved the way you described how it’s so different and how it takes his breath away because it felt so real and so in character.
Oh man! I'm so happy you thought it worked... because it was the ending that I just couldn't pin down, and I knew I'd have to somehow bring it back to the begining of the fic for the whole thing to come full circle.

[kaylost]

It is such an amazing story! It´s so like them acting that way and I really hope they have a relationship, actually after the sneak peak, I do believe there´s gonna be some feelings between them.
You should definitely write more! Thanks for the story!

[folie_lex]

Thank you for the comment *hugs*

actually after the sneak peak, I do believe there´s gonna be some feelings between them
I actually think that there are feelings during the sneak peek. At least definitelly from his side!

And I too hope TPTB treat them more than just a one off hookup and that thet give them a fair chance as a couple.
They so totally deserve it... they owe it to their undeniable chemistry alone! ;)