FanFic: Take my hand, set me free.

Feb 28, 2011 21:23



Title: Take my hand, set me free.
Characters-Pairings: Erica, Hobbes, Sid - Erica/Hobbes
Rating: PG
Summary: “Any type of physical contact they’ve ever had usually he has initiated (and it’s rarely ever under pleasant circumstances), or it involves her punching him in the face (which is not pleasant, period).”
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shikabane_mai February 28 2011, 21:16:16 UTC
He’s noticed she is generally overly affectionate... with everyone else that is.
This is so true! Which is why I love it so much whenever they touch because those touches are actually significant!

I loved the visual of Hobbes wrapping his arm around Erica’s waist. Something very sexy about it. ;D

The setting this time, is textbook them.
And he hates it.
So he wipes off the smirk, he swallows the sarcasm (and it tastes so bitter) and sits back with his guns, starting from the top: Ignoring her.
Awww, Hobbes. This story being from his POV is so nice.

And she is half way out the door but she reciprocates, both the smile and the look, and it is such an affectionate gesture, that he finds it a little hard to breathe.
Omg, this sentence. My favourite part of the fic! I loved the way you described how it’s so different and how it takes his breath away because it felt so real and so in character.

And this whole fic in general is just making me look forward to tomorrow’s episode even more! You should definitely write more Hobbes/Erica in the future! :D

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folie_lex February 28 2011, 21:34:56 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment :)

You should definitely write more Hobbes/Erica in the future! :D
I generally don't write a lot, cause I'm not really that good, and I hardly have the patience for it, but I was in the hospital bored to death and this just kinda came out of that...

I loved the visual of Hobbes wrapping his arm around Erica’s waist. Something very sexy about it. ;D
Believe it or not, I'd actually written this about 4 weeks ago...
Glad to see it turned out exactly how I'd imagined it ;)
(and I mean exactly)

Omg, this sentence. My favourite part of the fic! I loved the way you described how it’s so different and how it takes his breath away because it felt so real and so in character.
Oh man! I'm so happy you thought it worked... because it was the ending that I just couldn't pin down, and I knew I'd have to somehow bring it back to the begining of the fic for the whole thing to come full circle.

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