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Aug 24, 2011 16:50

Title: Riza and Rebecca's Excellent Adventure
Author: annepackrat
Recipient: Red (redasatomato)
Rating: PG-13 or T
Characters/Pairings: Riza, Rebecca, Hughes, Falman, Black Hayate, Havoc (sort of), Minor Roy/Riza (Royai) and Rebecca/Havoc
Summary: At Roy's request Hughes must unravel just what exactly happened during Riza and Rebecca's night out on the town. Somehow ( Read more... )

recipient: redasatomato, character: rebecca catalina, character: riza hawkeye, fic

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likeadeuce August 24 2011, 22:13:36 UTC
Oh, God, this is very funny. I love the 'teaching the dog the national anthem' and 'where are we going to get a snake this time of night?' Plus Hawkeye 'metaphorically' letting her hair down. Priceless.

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seta_suzume August 25 2011, 08:17:29 UTC
So funny! It's pretty late here, so I had to stifle my laughter. XD After the story about the drag club, pretty much everything was making me want to laugh. I wish I could be friends with Rebecca now!

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catw00man August 25 2011, 20:49:44 UTC
This is seriously hilarious! I can't even say what I liked the most but I LOVED how you worked in so much from Falman's dry humor to making Breda a moonshiner and Jean with the thong... I'm laughing again! The story really flowed brilliantly and the drunken logic was golden. I think you really nailed the characters too because I could see Roy wanting to see her have a special night out once a year. I think you handled the way they dealt with "last year's" events very well too. So in character and true to canon.

In short, I'm impressed! and highly amused. :-) Great job!!

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redasatomato August 26 2011, 05:56:23 UTC
Are you kidding me this is amazing and hilarious and just--

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annepackrat August 28 2011, 18:10:02 UTC
Lol, I'm glad you liked it! I was afraid you'd be upset because it didn't completely match your prompt.

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r_kimono August 28 2011, 00:01:40 UTC
Oh, gosh, this is hilarious. Poor, poor Hughes. Riza's 'speedholes' made me laugh the hardest, though. XD

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