Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 235, Smile, Alphonse's Smile

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Prompt 235, Smile, Alphonse's Smile

Sep 02, 2013 14:27

Title: Al's Smile
Author: Goldfishlover73
Series: Brotherhood
Characters: Edward
Word count: 207
Summary: Edward wouldn't stop until he saw Al's smile again.

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prompt 235, goldfishlover73

Comments 12

m14mouse September 2 2013, 23:56:34 UTC

This! Just...this! I want to hug them and never let them go. Just...this! (I need bigger words for this...but this is awesome!)

goldfishlover73 September 3 2013, 05:41:26 UTC

Awe! Thank you!

ssadropout September 3 2013, 19:33:42 UTC

Oh, yes! Al definitely has a smiley personality. Thank goodness we finally got to see his smiley face. Ed would have really missed seeing that smile, all of those years. Well done.

goldfishlover73 September 9 2013, 01:47:31 UTC

Thank you!

cornerofmadness September 7 2013, 17:01:14 UTC

This is very sweet

goldfishlover73 September 9 2013, 01:46:18 UTC

Thanks!!

drummerdancer September 8 2013, 02:07:08 UTC

Ed is always so determined. And really, who wouldn't want to see Al's smile? It's so sweet.

goldfishlover73 September 8 2013, 21:54:08 UTC

Thanks!

evil_little_dog September 8 2013, 12:35:42 UTC

Hmmm, very nice look at Ed's guilt and determination.

goldfishlover73 September 8 2013, 21:53:39 UTC

Thanks!