Prompt 222: Did you ever...? - Precociousness Should Come with a Warning Label

[catw00man]

Title: Precociousness Should Come with a Warning Label
Author: Catw00man
Series: PRE Brotherhood/Manga; From the Beginning: In Pieces
Word Count: 2,926
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy Mustang, Chris Mustang and more
Summary: The Madame is forced to be a little more honest then she ever intended.
Author’s Note: I think I'm actually starting to get an idea where

Comments

[capnhoozits]

That was really powerful, and I definitely teared up at the end of that one. Nice little Grumman cameo, too!

[catw00man]

Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked. I so had this whole idea that didn't exactly get there how I planned it but I like how it worked out. LOL And yeah, I had to sneak a little Grumman in there just for fun.

[lazylamia]

It was sad and sweet :)

[catw00man]

Thank you! I'm having so much fun exploring this little one.

[ssadropout]

I love Roy's defiance in this segment: his running away and declaring to Grumman that he's Chris' nephew despite her clear instructions and remark to the colonel. This long train ride has really given the two of them some time to get to know each other. The end was very moving.

[bay115]

Bittersweet ending there but heartwarming too. Glad the two cleared up some things after Roy's initial outburst. Great work!

[cornerofmadness]

I have no doubt dealing with Roy would be difficult, being as smart as he is. Well done.