Prompt 222: Did you ever...? - Precociousness Should Come with a Warning Label

Jun 03, 2013 11:54

Title: Precociousness Should Come with a Warning Label
Author: Catw00man
Series: PRE Brotherhood/Manga; From the Beginning: In Pieces
Word Count: 2,926
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy Mustang, Chris Mustang and more
Summary: The Madame is forced to be a little more honest then she ever intended.
Author’s Note: I think I'm actually starting to get an idea where ( Read more... )

catw00man, prompt 222

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evil_little_dog June 9 2013, 18:59:00 UTC
I like how she managed to explain to him how dangerous the world is, without talking down to him.

Good work.

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zippitgood June 9 2013, 22:14:01 UTC
Poor Roy. I really like how you're exploring the developing relationship between Roy and Chris and how it's not perfect from the get go like it would be in truth. It'll be interesting to see if Madame is as honest with him moving forward as she is right now.

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