Prompt 170~Abuse: "Inhumane"

Jun 01, 2012 10:19


Title: Inhumane
Author: Sonja Jade
Series: hmm… Brotherhood and 1st series blended?  Kimblee is kind of different in each series…
Word Count: 1,829
Rating: M (definitely a horror fic)
Character(s): Kimblee, his parents
Summary: Kimblee’s taste for blood develops very early in his life…
Warnings: I think Kimblee enough is a warning, but there’s also animal ( Read more... )

sonjajade, prompt 170

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anonymous June 1 2012, 17:51:19 UTC
sonjajade June 1 2012, 21:24:05 UTC
I await your fluffy Royai with baited breath!!! Big thanks by the way for doing the beta work!

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47thlight June 1 2012, 19:13:37 UTC
The poor doggie :( since I've lost a pet recently to a traumatic death, this was very difficult to read. In fact, I almost stopped reading, but I pressed on because it's Kinblee and I love your writing style. You gave us a horror fic that turned the stomach and set off the water works. Well written!

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sonjajade June 1 2012, 21:25:18 UTC
Oh sweetie I'm so sorry! *hugs* Thank you for reading anyway, and thanks for your comments :)

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seta_suzume June 1 2012, 21:49:35 UTC
Kimblee! *_*

.......need I say more? XD;

I always think that if Kimblee's parents were pretty much ordinary people it must have been quite difficult for them...

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sonjajade June 2 2012, 01:36:47 UTC
Yes, I have a thing for serial killers and I read lots of interviews with the parents and they honestly have no idea what happened to their precious babies. The Kimblees seem to be a normal family with the exception of that cruel little brat of theirs with the superiority complex XD

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antigone_rex June 2 2012, 04:39:33 UTC
DISTURBED. Talk about abuse. Sheesh. Remind me to take heed of all future stories labeled "horror."

Well done!

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sonjajade June 2 2012, 11:26:52 UTC
Disturbed is what I was going for, so I'll take that as a compliment! Thanks for reading my sick fic :)

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sofipitch June 6 2012, 02:29:23 UTC
Wow, this is not going to let me sleep for the rest of the week. But what to expect when the character is Kimblee and the prompt is "abuse".
Why did I read this again?
Even thought I now have severe lack of sleep, this was very good and very well written. To be able to write from a seriel killer's eye is very hard, so I send you my praise. You put lots of effort into this.

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sonjajade June 7 2012, 23:08:33 UTC
thank you so much!

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