Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 154, set in the future, "Legacy"

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Prompt 154, set in the future, "Legacy"

Feb 10, 2012 02:06

Title: "Legacy"
Author: Likeadeuce
Series: Manga/Brotherhood
Word Count: ~1,300
Rating: R (language)
Characters: Original Character; Olivier Mira Armstrong
Summary: "It's not often that a cadet specifically requests to spend her first assignment at Briggs."

( FIC: Legacy )

likeadeuce, prompt 154

Comments 31

bay115 February 10 2012, 07:44:50 UTC

Oh, this is very nice. Very interesting to see how Roy and Riza's child interacts with Olivier. LOL totally imagine Roy screaming at Liz for wanting to be at Briggs. Great work!

likeadeuce February 10 2012, 13:46:44 UTC

Riza is really used to putting the virtual earplugs in while these things go on.

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks!

ladynorbert February 10 2012, 08:11:49 UTC

Well, I did specifically request to see more of this daughter you've given them - and here she is! Full of surprises, too. Really well done!

likeadeuce February 10 2012, 13:48:27 UTC

Glad you liked it, thanks!

This was supposed to be the start of something longer, and I haven't entirely worked out (or have forgotten) exactly what Liz's and Olivier's motives and plans were supposed to be but I'm sure there are a lot of directions this could go in. . .

vince_moon February 10 2012, 15:07:15 UTC

Ah, now this is an excellent story. Well done.

likeadeuce February 10 2012, 22:49:46 UTC

Thank you!

seta_suzume February 10 2012, 21:05:47 UTC

It- it- it's Liz and Olivier! I'm so happy to read about this (and well look forward to more in the future)! Very, very interesting. (I approve of the Mustang Act)

likeadeuce February 10 2012, 22:51:32 UTC

Thank you, and. . .hahaha. I don't know what happens next?! I will see if I can figure it out.

Re: the Mustang Act, it somehow makes sense to me that Roy would both have military alchemy outlawed and teach his daughter how to do it.

seta_suzume February 11 2012, 03:07:49 UTC

You're welcome! I figure you have lots of things to work on- there's no rush- you have too much headcanon for there to never be anymore.

Re: the Mustang Act: I agree. So very Roy.

likeadeuce February 11 2012, 04:45:49 UTC

Ahh! Yes!

Tell me something to get me motivated on the Big Bang?!

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coastal_spirit February 14 2012, 18:51:52 UTC

I just happened upon this, and found it to be utterly delightful, very believable and totally in-character. No small feat. Kudos!

likeadeuce February 14 2012, 20:04:43 UTC

Thank you!

Imagine that kid's life, hmm?