Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 135, Romance, "Hold on"

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Prompt 135, Romance, "Hold on"

Oct 06, 2011 14:40

Title: Hold on.
Author: halighfataliter
Series: CoS  
Word Count: 250
Rating: G 
Characters: Edward Elric, Alfons Heidrich.
Warning: Mentions of homosexual relationship.
Author's Note: Song of writing, Biko by Bloc Party.

Summary: Alfons is dying, Ed understands. You're not doing this alone.

( The sound was soft and muffled but Ed heard it anyway. )

halighfataliter, prompt 135

Comments 15

lepharus October 6 2011, 15:39:52 UTC

I have such a soft spot for this pairing, and I like how you wrote them. They'd have such a sad and sweet story if they were together.

halighfataliter October 7 2011, 13:51:30 UTC

Thank you. This is my first time writing this pairing so I'm glad that you liked it. I can only picture them bittersweet...

shindkrow October 6 2011, 23:38:40 UTC

I haven't quite got into this pairing yet, but I was intrigued! :D I love tragic romances~

halighfataliter October 7 2011, 13:55:07 UTC

I like the "yet" in that sentence! I am personally a bit picky about this pairing... but they do have a nice tragic potential... Thanks for your comment. :)

militsa October 7 2011, 02:40:47 UTC

halighfataliter October 7 2011, 13:55:46 UTC

Thank you! <3

ghostfriendly October 7 2011, 22:13:40 UTC

Very sensual, with much emotion. Very well done.

bay115 October 8 2011, 04:17:29 UTC

Awww, poor them. The emotions there are done well. Great work!