Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 135, Romance, "Hold on"

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Prompt 135, Romance, "Hold on"

Oct 06, 2011 14:40

Title: Hold on.
Author: halighfataliter
Series: CoS  
Word Count: 250
Rating: G 
Characters: Edward Elric, Alfons Heidrich.
Warning: Mentions of homosexual relationship.
Author's Note: Song of writing, Biko by Bloc Party.

Summary: Alfons is dying, Ed understands. You're not doing this alone.

( The sound was soft and muffled but Ed heard it anyway. )

halighfataliter, prompt 135

Comments 15

raceulfson October 8 2011, 18:43:37 UTC

I love Alfons and stories about his relationship with Ed. This is perfect, touching and tender and melancholy.

kyofujimiya October 8 2011, 20:34:15 UTC

Such a beautifully bittersweet piece. Your writing is amazing, felt this through and through. Thank you for sharing!

ssadropout October 9 2011, 01:31:21 UTC

Alfons Heidrich always breaks my heart, and your sadly sweet story touched me even more.

miss_auto1621 October 9 2011, 03:53:29 UTC

I love it just 'cause it's CoS! *gushes* Although I'm used to seeing them as brothers, this actually very cute and sweet. If they were together, Ed would so totally take care of and protect Alfons with his life. Or at least try to keep him happy. It's sad that Alfons is dying. D`X But at least Ed is there for him. :)

Very cute.

catw00man October 9 2011, 17:26:32 UTC

Awwwwww this is so very touching. You could really feel the emotion and the descriptions are great. Very nice job.