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fluffyxcloud

Rainbow

Oct 03, 2011 14:06

Title: Rainbow
Rating: pg-13
Genre: romance, some pretty intense angst
Pairing: 2jun

A.N: for justcallmepriya because she wrote me an amazing fic and this is my present to her! Let's compare angst, yobeo! <3

Summary: Go go (what should I do?) over the rainbow, go go (where should I go?) over the rainbow...

( I wanted to live like a good guy...how did we become like this? )

pairing: 2jun, rating: pg-13, !fanfic

Comments 17

fluffyxcloud October 3 2011, 21:12:51 UTC

SPOT for justcallmepriya <3 Love you, dear! I hope you like it *bites nails nervously*

I'M FINALLY HERE TO REVEL IN THE SPOT YOU LEFT ME... justcallmepriya October 13 2011, 12:35:31 UTC

It's taken me ages I know, I've been waiting for my house that I'm staying in for uni to get proper internet instead of the slightly dodgy public wi-fi which likes to cut out :|

Anyways, so here goes :3

I've already read this beauteous story before and afterwards I was left completely depressed. You said in your comment on The Liar, that you hope you can make me just as depressed...well...

( ... )

Re: I'M FINALLY HERE TO REVEL IN THE SPOT YOU LEFT ME... justcallmepriya October 13 2011, 12:36:11 UTC

(sorry had to split it into two)

( ... )

Re: I'M FINALLY HERE TO REVEL IN THE SPOT YOU LEFT ME... fluffyxcloud October 17 2011, 05:01:59 UTC

FA;LSKDJFA;LSKDJF OMG YOU LIKE...MADE ME GO ALL *SQUEEEEE* WITH YOUR COMMENT! No joke!

I'm so glad you love it, Priya cause I was worried you'd be like "aaaa /stabs/!" kkkkk <3 but I will also admit that I'm cackling evilly with the knowlege that I made you cry kkkkkk

Because that means I did a good job!!! ^__________^

And that song just needed a story, yanno? le sigh <3333 I just can't handle it heehee. And yeah ^/////^ I'm just...fjas;ldkfj omg I'm so happy you like it so much!!! I LOVE YOU COME VISIT ME RN!!

weerainbow October 3 2011, 21:46:42 UTC

My eyes are blurry with the tears that threaten to spill out from my heart. And I don't even know what to say...my heart aches reading this. It aches for Doojoon and how he has lost himself and allowed the pressures around him to push him into a mould he doesn't fit and that hurts to try and bend to suit. And it aches for Junhyung who is left so empty and lost as Doojoon drifts out of his life, taking his heart with him.

Those words, "I'm happy" are so heartbreaking. It seems like Junhyung is trying to hold onto the happiness of the past, hoping it can keep him going and stop his heart from crumbling completely to ashes. And Doojoon is trying to convince himself of another lie which this time he does wish to become true unlike all the others he has been beaten down with ( ... )

fluffyxcloud October 5 2011, 03:42:17 UTC

heehee that first line is so poetic, dear! ^___^ <3 I'm sorry I made you sad. I honestly followed the lyrics of the song very closely, because I think that the song is about as perfect as it gets. it made me cry when i heard it the first time and had the lyrics up in front of me. For me, this fic is extremely personal. I've always been very...opinionated about homosexuality in the sense that I can't understand how people can be so STUPID about it. it makes me upset sometimes, talking with people that are narrowminded and "think its wrong." I can't even...ugh.

I'm glad that my angst is good! I prefer fluff but I also enjoy writing angst. But that's definitely a field that I think I improve on ^__^

I'm really so glad that you like it, my dear! Really, it makes me so happy <3 you know I don't know if i've asked you or whatever, but if you have twitter or msn or something let me know <3 kkkk you can be my muse/beta/whatever heehee ^___^

I'd say I'm sorry again for making you sad but secretly I'm not-so-sorry cause that was my goal

weerainbow October 5 2011, 14:11:04 UTC

Ahh don't be sorry my dear, it's good to let out some tears sometimes anyway!! And even though it was sad it was such an interesting story to read and so touching. If I wanted to avoid feeling sad over it I wouldn't have read past the "some pretty intense angst" at the start :o)

I do have msn but I don't use it that much lately to be honest. If you want to add me though you can (weerainbow@hotmail.com) or you can always send me an e-mail or message me here on LJ if you want. I'd be delighted to hear from you anytime!!

*squishes you*

chibi_tenten October 4 2011, 02:56:48 UTC

;A; you always manage to make me read couples i wouldnt read ever from other authors, first junseob, now 2jun... Its almost 5 am and im on my cell so ill leave a real comment tomorrow...just wanted you to know that you made me love 2jun for an moment and that i want a sequel in which Hyunseung fixes Jun's heart :D

fluffyxcloud October 5 2011, 03:44:46 UTC

^____^ I'm glad that I "make" you read other pairings kkkk (but come on, you click the button on your own free will). Admit you like it kkkk <3 I still write you junseung (I still luuuuve the junseung)

wow, the fact that I managed to make you like something else, even if for a little bit, makes me really.....proud. Only because I know it had to be written well to make it okay, you know? I had to make it 2jun. I mean...no other pairing would have fit quite as well. It just...fell together that way kkkk

kkkkk I'll hold you to that real comment, missy! But for now, you go rest your mind ^___^ <3

chibi_tenten October 5 2011, 11:30:22 UTC

So now, here it comes, the real comment xD Sorry for the delay, dear, you know life it's a bitch U_U ( ... )

chibi_tenten October 5 2011, 11:30:34 UTC

The flashback made me think again that Doojoon is such a selfish bastard, he's only thinking about his own reputation and not about the person who is beside him and who he supposedly loves...¬¬ He's not and won't ever be up to give himself away or lose anything in order to be with Junhyung, it doesn't matter how much he "may" love him, he's not ready to lose anything since he really doesnt know how to love the other T^T ( ... )

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fluffyxcloud October 5 2011, 03:46:29 UTC

hehe, it's all "infinite flow" whose to credit for the realistic tragedy. I followed the song really closely, because for me, the lyrics are about as perfectly heart-breaking as it gets.

I'm really glad you liked it! I rarely enjoy permanent angst but when its a topic that's...pretty impossible to wrap up in a pretty bow, it just has to end sadly. So thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it!!

sinnerchrno13 October 4 2011, 17:30:08 UTC

this is a masterpiece. everybody should get to read this. i applaud you.

i normally don't read 2jun, but your post about the song caught me, and thus this also caught my interest. i'm also very unhappy about the state of homosexuality in Korea, although it's been improving very slightly. i think these 2 are the perfect characters to portray the story, and you managed to tell the story in a way that won't make people see doojoon as a douchebag, but rather a conflicted man.

thank you for making this. well done.

p.s. i absolutely loved that line from the song. >_

fluffyxcloud October 5 2011, 03:56:19 UTC

I can't even begin to tell you how honored I am by your review. It's seriously the best one I've ever gotten (ever) and I'm flattered that you think everyone should read it ^___^

You know, I normally don't write 2jun either, but I just couldn't see it being anyone else. I'm actually happy that you saw that too. They just...fit, right?

I don't know about the situation in Korea improving so much as they're pretending that it doesn't exist. I feel so sad towards all the people there right now lying about it everyday. It breaks my heart. :(

I'm really, really flattered that you liked this so much. so thanks for leaving such an amazing review! I love this song--it's probably the most powerful korean song I've ever heard (which is a lot, really). (I wonder how much Tablo had to do with this song. The man is my role model and hero. I really look up to him).