Rainbow
Title: Rainbow
Rating: pg-13
Genre: romance, some pretty intense angst
Pairing: 2jun
A.N: for justcallmepriya because she wrote me an amazing fic and this is my present to her! Let's compare angst, yobeo! <3
Summary: Go go (what should I do?) over the rainbow, go go (where should I go?) over the rainbow...
( I wanted to live like a good guy...how did we become like this? )
Rating: pg-13
Genre: romance, some pretty intense angst
Pairing: 2jun
A.N: for justcallmepriya because she wrote me an amazing fic and this is my present to her! Let's compare angst, yobeo! <3
Summary: Go go (what should I do?) over the rainbow, go go (where should I go?) over the rainbow...
( I wanted to live like a good guy...how did we become like this? )
Anyways, so here goes :3
I've already read this beauteous story before and afterwards I was left completely depressed. You said in your comment on The Liar, that you hope you can make me just as depressed...well...
I applaud you, you left me in a depressed state, completely and utterly lost at what to do with myself while trying not to shake Doojoon by the shoulders and tell him that he's totally and utterly moronic even though it's not really his fault that society is a bitch :|
I love your writing style. I remember when I read the first draft of this and I was just so...enamoured by your writing. The way you're so descriptive and how it flows so nicely, making all the words fit perfectly with one another...URGGGGHHH let me your writing style please! :)
If I was that valet driver just FYI, I'd be like "Mr Yoon, may I drive you!" sexual innuendo intended...what I said nothing ^^;
The green and red pattered carpet was nothing like Christmas and the cheap lights on the wall didn’t nearly resemble china, and he idly wondered how such wealthy hotels always maintained dim and unfriendly hallways.
There's something about this line that I love so much. It's the amount of thought you put into it. Someone else would have written it as "the carpet was red and green, nothing like christmas and the lights were cheap" it would have ended there, but you, ohmygod you, Cathy you like...I don't know how to explain it, but you just do it so well, construct sentences so perfectly and sdhfjkashgjsfhjghsfjghsghsj...*flails* your way of writing makes me all flail-y and emotional! I just love it so much
It was funny how missing one man brought the realization that he missed himself. The himself that he entrusted to one, single person.
HFSKGHKSHGSHGKSHGKSHJGHSJHGSFGS....
A soft whisper of his name jumpstarted his heart.
marry me...?
Pain shouldn’t hurt this much without physical infliction, and yet maybe he should blame Doojoon for beating his body with his abandonment.
Despite his anguish, Junhyung’s heart weakly begged Doojoon to be happy.
Maybe that’s what hurt the most.
I CAN'T OHMYGOD I CANNOT! THIS IS HOW YOU'VE LEFT ME...
I like have to hold back tears because I have my make up on and I need to go to uni in a moment but fuck, fuck Cathy I want to cry so much because you know my love for 2jun, and 2jun angst just...I can't...I'm rambling. This is so beautiful, just so wonderful and it makes my own heart beat rapidly and drop a little at the sentence at the end! I love when stories make my heart like sink, because there's so much emotion, so much wonderful emotion and...*legit starts crying*
ihy, you made my make-up run! OTL I'm kidding, I love you so much.
God the bit where Junhyung finds out about Doojoon getting married...*clings to you and cries into your shoulder*
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(I use this gif too much, but it shows my internal frustration well) YOON DOOJOON, YOU LISTEN TO ME, SOCIETY MAY BE A BITCH, IT MAY MAKE YOU SCARED TO STAND UP FOR YOURSELF AND MAKE IT EASIER TO HIDE BEHIND FALSE PRETENSES, BUT YOU WILL NOT BE HAPPY! *shakes him* YOU WILL NOT BE HAPPY BECAUSE YOU'RE NOT WITH THE ONE YOU WANT TO BE WITH, THE ONE YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO SPENT YOUR DAYS WITH...*continues to shake him* YOON DOOJOON WAKE UP, WAAAAKE UP AND SMELL THE COFFEE! /internal frustration is over
the ending, with Doojoon saying "Let's be born in a better world in the next life, I'm happy" I'm like choking on tears here, i can barely see my screen okay, it's a wonder that I can type, but I just...
In all fairness I really want to shut myself up in my room, wrap a blanket around myself and cry. Well done Cathy, the emotional angst of this beautiful story has made me want to just stay in my room and weep. even though i knew Doojoon would leave, I had that small glimmer of hope that he'd turn that car around and go back...he did no such thing...
let me just hug you forever and never let you go.
I love this so much Cathy, I really do. I have no words to show my appreciation nor how much I love this story, because so much thought went into it, the structure, the lyrics, the way you wrote it so descriptively, everything had me captivated! I'm sorry for rambling on in this comment, it's a very inadequate comment for a very earthshattering, amazing story...but thank you, thank you so much for this. It is wondrous and beautiful and I can't...I can't even describe how I feel because it's a mixture of complete depression OTL and enlightenment and total love for you ^^
So i'll leave you with this somewhat hilarious gif of Yoseob...
I'm going to go cry in my corner now
thank you brain twin~ I love you so much :D
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I'm so glad you love it, Priya cause I was worried you'd be like "aaaa /stabs/!" kkkkk <3 but I will also admit that I'm cackling evilly with the knowlege that I made you cry kkkkkk
Because that means I did a good job!!! ^__________^
And that song just needed a story, yanno? le sigh <3333 I just can't handle it heehee. And yeah ^/////^ I'm just...fjas;ldkfj omg I'm so happy you like it so much!!! I LOVE YOU COME VISIT ME RN!!
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