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fluffyxcloud

Halfway

Jun 23, 2011 13:13

Halfway
Pairing: Junseob
Rating: pg
Genre: angst, romance
Prompt: 094. “I Never Should Have Let You Go”; Junhyung/Yoseob
Challenge: (kfic challenge)

Summary: Junhyung is tired of being the only one who tries. Yoseob is too afraid to make the needed step.

( “Yoseob,” he said softly, clearing his throat as the singer’s name scraped it on the way out. )

rating: pg, pairing: junseob, !fanfic

Comments 10

leejaehwa7 June 23 2011, 20:57:59 UTC

this was lovely and sad
I love JunSeob...and this was very realistic...the whole wanting to be with someone, giving in, trying to be your best, but feeling like you aren't good enough...
And I love that song ^_^
Thanks for sharing <3

fluffyxcloud June 25 2011, 05:30:07 UTC

Well I'm glad you liked it ^____^ <33

senbonsakura June 24 2011, 15:18:58 UTC

This fic is so compelling I was inspired to write my own Junseob fic kekeke.. but knowing me.. I'd like scrap it and wait for another awesome one from you.
I love the deep deep emotions coming from both sides.
Yoseob was just spacing out isn't he?
Junhyung was so badly affected too...
Doojoon's always there for Junseob. Go leada!
It just strikes me that Love is hard work. Happy ever after is an acomplishment!
Great job!

fluffyxcloud June 25 2011, 05:31:00 UTC

OOOH really?! I think you should up it up ^__________^ I'm sure it deserves letting the world read it! <333

I'm glad you liked it! <333 you rock my socks

chibi_tenten June 26 2011, 08:34:50 UTC

I can't believe you made me read my first Junseob fic ever...T__T you are cruel, but I read and I'm going to comment it...There's only a problem, my brain is biased like this so he tries, and tries and tries once again to imagine this a Junseob fic but in my head there was only junseung, you write Yoseob and I read Hyunseung xD

But this was kind of sad, poor Junhyung, this kind of relationships are not healthy, he should dump Yoseob for real and run towards Hyunseung because we all know that he's waiting for the rapper if he's just giving and not getting anything back, it's not fair even though most of the relationships out there are not fair for one of the parties...I liked that Doojoon was the one talking with Junhyung like the amazing leader he is but I want him to take Yoseob back, pretty please xD

I'm glad this was short...and it was kinda angsty I'll forget the "kinda happy" ending xD and if it weren't yours I wouldn't have read it, so feel proud of yourself xDDD

fluffyxcloud June 27 2011, 18:45:46 UTC

heehee and I love you for it~ <33 don't worry dear, I'm working on a new junseung chaptered fic and it's got dooseob and all that good stuff ^________^ It'll make you happy again~ <333333

*I'M SO PROUD OF MYSELF BWAHAHAHAA*

weerainbow July 12 2011, 10:32:19 UTC

I'm finally catching up on all your writing!!! I went away on holiday and came back to lots but didn't get round to reading them yet. But WOW I'm so glad I got started, this is...WOW!!! Seriously there is so much depth of feeling in it, both Junhyung and Yoseob are so broken but still so in love with each other. I love how clearly you brought that out and yet how they had both been so different in how they interacted with each other, making their love so difficult in the past. Seeing Junhyung so desperate for Yoseob even after being the one to pull away tugged at my heart so much!! I wanted to cry for him and hug him tight. And then when Yoseob walked into the apartment and he was there waiting for him still it spoke so much of how deeply he needed the other to live. But hard as it was on them I'm glad he'd made that decision to break away (even if his decision only lasted that day really) because Yoseob needed to see that he had to take a step of faith and believe in Junhyung enough that he could open his heart properly. I don't know ( ... )

fluffyxcloud July 12 2011, 23:27:16 UTC

AAAA you are here and you make me so happy <33 ^__________________^

hope you had a good holiday!!! :3 and you jumped right into the kind of comment that makes my heart flutter hehehehehehehe :D I had fun writing this one if I recall (kkk long ago but not really)

I'm excited that you're reading my stuff again! heehee <333333333333333

weerainbow July 13 2011, 00:39:43 UTC

*squishes you*
My holiday was lovely, thank you!! =] You're such a sweetheart ^^ *squishes you some more*

I was going to start reading your new chaptered fic today but I ended up going out for a while so didn't get round to it but I did have a quick peek and I love the sound of it so far!! I'll catch up with everything this week at least ^^

I'm excited to be READING it again sweetie! I did miss your words a lot. I'm looking forward to reading more tomorrow if I have the time YAY.

♥♥♥♥♥♥

fluffyxcloud July 13 2011, 04:19:03 UTC

*loves the squish*

oooh I'm glad you like it so far my love ^_____^ this week? heehee, my goal is to update the next chapter of it by the end of this week too heehee <3

you missed me???? ^////////^ YOU MISSED MY WORDS?!???!?!!?! /dies/ you are so sweet~ <33333333

take your time, it'll all be here for a while heehee <33333333333 I LOVE YOU!!!!