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FANFIC POST: What Music They Make chapter 9: "Non Troppo" (Twilight)

Feb 17, 2008 20:12

Title: What Music They Make
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
[MASTER POST]
Characters & Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Rating: R
Summary: When an unexpected conflict with the Volturi brings Jacob back into her life, Bella finds that being a vampire only makes it even more complicated for her to be in love with two people.

( I've lain with the devil / cursed God above / forsaken Heaven / to bring you my love )

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Comments 29

anonymous February 21 2008, 01:12:25 UTC

ok its good but i hate the idea of her not loving edward but jacob more, as i think jacob is absolutely awful for her, and that edward is amazing for her.

flowrs4ophelia February 21 2008, 07:32:54 UTC

i hate the idea of her not loving edward but jacob more
Did not say that. :)

twilightgirl01 February 22 2008, 00:21:15 UTC

do u have this story on fanfic.net and if u do can u post it for me cause id like to put it on favourites. so when ever u post a new chapter i can just go to my list of websites and like keep up with updates.i truely love this story :)

flowrs4ophelia February 22 2008, 03:05:53 UTC

Yep, it's up here. Thank you. :)

Hello all I'm new here ! anonymous February 22 2008, 19:27:56 UTC

Just wanted to say Hello to everyone.
Much to read and learn here, I'm sure I will enjoy !

lovesweetestsin February 23 2008, 23:23:24 UTC

This is one amazing fic. Literally AMAZING. I discovered it a few days ago, and while not having a lot of time, I made time and read it all. You're such a great writer, it's baffling--but that's not meant to, um, be insulting in any way (lawlz). It's just that you don't usually find this good of a fic. Reading this story, you'd think you're reading some excerpt from the next book, being written the way it is...so I applaud you~! *insert lame cheering and whistling here ( ... )

flowrs4ophelia February 24 2008, 02:29:19 UTC

Thank you very much!

But I'll stop swooning over him sorry.
Hehe, that's okay. :) I do like Edward, he's a very good guy, and not to sound conceited but I especially like him when I write him. LOL. I guess just like how you feel about Jacob, sometimes I'm fine with him and other times he can aggravate me, but in fic even as I'm meaning to keep him in character I can kind of minimize the parts of his personality I don't like so much. I find it a lot more satisfying to do that than just write him more unlikeable to make him look bad like other J/B fans might like to do in their fic. And I'm always glad to hear that this makes it accessible and possibly enjoyable even for people who may not actually ship J/B.

borntobewild13 May 28 2008, 15:01:02 UTC

I might as well give up on my story, you've already written most of my stories and seasoned it to boot.*hits palm on forehead*