FANFIC POST: What Music They Make chapter 9: "Non Troppo" (Twilight)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: What Music They Make
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
[MASTER POST]
Characters & Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Rating: R
Summary: When an unexpected conflict with the Volturi brings Jacob back into her life, Bella finds that being a vampire only makes it even more complicated for her to be in love with two people.

Comments

[glassdollbleeds]

Bella can be an extremely frustrating character...but I keep reading because I do enjoy all her relationships. And this chapter was great (even felt a little bad for Edward there...which is a very hard task to accomplish).

[twilightgirl01]

im going through one of those emotional stage kind of things right now. and that truley broke my heart plz plz dont leave me hanging. I know it probably takes a while to write chapters but if the next chapter is out tomorrow i will truely love u forever.

[twilightgirl01]

plz reply

[flowrs4ophelia]

Aw, I'm sorry, bb. :( I'm trying to get the next part finished as fast as I can. Right now I'm working on college applications and a bunch of loathsome stuff like that and tomorrow would just be impossible, but it's going to be shorter than these last chapters so it shouldn't take as long.

wow....

[psychochick89]

You are seriously amazing!!! I just read this whole story in one sitting, and I kept having to remind myself that this was a fanfic and not the real book! You do an amazing job of keeping the characters true to the books.

I can't wait for the next chapter, you've got me hooked!

i <3 u !

[anonymous]

yuo did an excellent job very cool! i cant wait until the next ch comes out!

[ninety6tears]

“Yes, and what do you think you could really want with a dog lover as part of your guard, then?”
Bitter much, Edward?

Even though I suspected a while back that the outcome of the conflict would be some kind of blackmail, I have no idea where you might be taking it from here. If she can actually join the Volturi, it should be interesting to see who's willing to go with her. Obviously Edward, though. Yawn.
You know what? Long distance friendships are for pants.

[flowrs4ophelia]

"Dog lover" was Marcus's word, not his. Fuck, I am so mean to Eddie... :(

I don't think anybody else would feel obligated enough to go with her. Living with the Volturi would be some tough shit and a bunch of drudgery if you're not the kind of person who gets off on being powerful and important. Haha, I'm really trying to make sure everyone sees how much this sucks.

You know what? Long distance friendships are for pants.
LOL. We know we don't want any pants around when it comes to Jacob.

[ninety6tears]

I realize Eddie would not regularly refer to Bella as a dog lover, but the fact that he really can't be happy about Bella's Jacob love seems to be making him xtra grumpiez.

We know we don't want any pants around when it comes to Jacob.
*DIES*

[flowrs4ophelia]

No no. Edward is incapable of blaming Bella for anything or even being somewhat bitter about anything like that. That's why they can be so lame.