FANFIC POST: What Music They Make chapter 9: "Non Troppo" (Twilight)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: What Music They Make
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
[MASTER POST]
Characters & Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Rating: R
Summary: When an unexpected conflict with the Volturi brings Jacob back into her life, Bella finds that being a vampire only makes it even more complicated for her to be in love with two people.

Comments

[cherise]

Great chapter, once again. I continue to be impressed with your plot twists. The conversation between Jacob and Bella is oh-so-frustrating yet satisfying at the same time, because their relationship is changing and it's hard to see where it's going. It's sad that she lied to him at the end, even if it was necessary.

I have to say, I didn't see any of it coming. I thought they were going to exchange Bella's life for sparing the werewolves, since Jacob had that dream of her burning. Not an equal deal, but that was my guess. The fascinating thing is, the Volturi are not, you know, Evil. They're not even bad. But they only have their own aims instead of the good of humanity, and that makes them bad, I suppose. Of course it'd be horrible if Bella had to join them, but it'd only be for eighty years and they do only keep peace. Hmm.

[flowrs4ophelia]

The fascinating thing is, the Volturi are not, you know, Evil.
In a way, that's kind of what I think, too. :) I think there are multiple ways of looking at it and Stephenie Meyer might not even agree with me, but as far as I'm concered there's some big gray areas when it comes to the world of vampires rather than just "yellow eyes = good, red eyes = bad." But for someone like Bella who personally can't stomach the idea of humans being nothing more than dinner and was really disturbed to see what they did to Bree in Eclipse, Volterra would probably be an extremely unpleasant environment to live in for so long.

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you're liking the fic. :D

WOW

[anonymous]

OMG!!!!!! Your chapter is amazing once again!! Love tha story

[edenerade]

You continually impress me with your plot intricacies and the places you're taking this story - I never know what to expect when reading an update, and I love that. Another fantastic chapter, can't wait for more <3

[noisywallflower]

That was really wonderful. And PJ Harvey lyrics for the cut! You really are good and you kept everyone in character, I think. Good job :)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Someone who knows PJ Harvey lyrics! *clings* LOL. For some reason I've been finding a lot of her songs in particular to really fit this fic. :)

Thanks so much! :D

[werewolfworship]

Needs more Lilah. I've always thought that if Jane used her power on one of the wolves it could spread to the others through their mental link, but I guess you didn't write it that way.