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flowerymisha

The First and The Last [1/3]

Nov 20, 2011 22:58

Title: The First and The Last [1/3]
Author: FloweryMisha
Pairing: WooGyu
Warning: BoyxBoy love. Enough said. Top!Sunggyu.
Summary: You’ll never know who you’re falling in love with.
( Read here... )

pairing: woogyu, yaoi, rating: r, pairing: myungyeol, !fanfiction

Comments 23

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flowerymisha December 12 2011, 13:22:27 UTC

yay! thank you! woo will forever be uke in my dictionary... XD thank you <3

moemoe2608 December 11 2011, 08:58:59 UTC

poor woohyunnie...........
his family sold him to the mafia.........
well, at least he met gyu~ ^^

this fic is really interesting, please update soon~ ^^

flowerymisha December 12 2011, 13:23:22 UTC

T_T thank you bb, I will try to update this soon! /hugs

ainbubbly90 December 11 2011, 11:28:06 UTC

Love ur storyline...
This chap could be enough to stand alone as oneshot...
But i hope u continue the story...
I want to know how sunggyu gonna get revenge for woohyun...

flowerymisha December 12 2011, 13:25:16 UTC

I've been wondering if I should continue it or leave it as it is...however something about the story's been bothering me, like...I don't know, how Sunggyu fell in love with Woohyun before his parents sold him to his family? XD

thank you so much bb <3

isaya_sama December 11 2011, 11:46:17 UTC

Omo, I remember this manga. But I like this version so much better.
I wonder if it's because of Sunggyu and Woohyun or just the general fact that your plot is different and I like this version better.
Oh well, I really liked it and I can't wait for the update. (:

flowerymisha December 12 2011, 13:29:49 UTC

In the manga the seme was torturing the uke with a vibrator and they had rough sex... I don't want to do it to Woohyun T_T Sunggyu will be veeeeery gentle when it comes to Woo XD

thank you babe. will try to update soon <3

isaya_sama December 12 2011, 23:08:07 UTC

Yeah, now I know the reason I like your story better. (:
No problem dear. I will be waiting for the update. <3

bloodtaki2 December 11 2011, 12:24:23 UTC

Since I don't want you to misunderstand, let me tell you that I liked this chapter a lot.

But everything is so weird, so unrealistic, I don't know what to think anymore. I had a lot of fun reading it and I'm looking forward to the next chapters, but really, something keeps on nagging me. Maybe because everything happened so quickly? i just don't know anymore. OTL
Woohyun falling for Sunggyu is understandable, Sunggyu falling for Woohyun too (as long as you explain it later), the whole Yakuza thing is cool too, the selling him because of debt is possible too. Everything's fine, so I don't know why I feel like something's wrong. -___-

Maybe it's because of how quickly Woohyun falls for Sunggyu and only thinks about calling him for help? I guess it also has to do with how unrealistic (and beautiful *sobs*) the smut scene was. I really doubt a normal person would immediatly feel pleasure WITHOUT A LOT of pain.

I'm sorry, this comment comes out as negative. I really liked it but there are some things that disturbed me! ;A;

flowerymisha December 12 2011, 13:33:41 UTC

Lol babe XD /hugs you tight

I'm glad that even though you feel disturbed, you're still willing to read it. So anyhoo, I myself feel disturbed by the story as well...maybe because it's rushing (there are some things that I keep for the next chappies) or the failed smut scene, gah! -_-" or maybe the "I love you" part. So there were a lot babe. Don't worry, I also feel that it's awful.

thank you baby /hugs