This is Hap pi n e s s. - 1/1

[florentineeggs]

This is Hap pi n e s s. (just kidding) (yunho/jaejoong)
1 485 words. angst. PG
◦ originally posted here.

A house with red windows in the middle of a field of daffodil-shaded dandelions and a sun that will set only when we're ready for tomorrow. One, two; the sound of his pulse reverberating in his chest and the number of people it takes for him to be

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[locofruitcake]

just so you know, i already know that every single one of my future comments will contain sad smilies and hearts. yes, i'm psychic like that.

this is so sad. i think i understand their need to run away and pretend this disease doesn't exist. it must be terrifying to know that someone you hold so dear is definitely going to leave you, for both of them :(((

i imagine this is their way of saying (goodbye) forever.

sadsadsad. why you do this to meeee ;_____; ♥

[florentineeggs]

gurl you silly silly thang ♥ i write relatively happy stuff too! sometimes! probably!!!! aklsdjf

jdklajdf MENDS YOU FOREVER IDK i just have this horrible love of angst and woe. terminal illnesses suck and good byes suck even more :( i'm kind of happy that it made you sad though, i did what i was trying to accomplish :) ♥ ilu and ty again for your very very very qt comments ♥♥!!

[anonymous]

this eats into my heart in so many ways ;_;

really good writing love, so glad to have read this.

[florentineeggs]

/mends your heart :)?

thank you so much, dkjafklsdf ack i think you're being too nice but thank youuuu ; ; ♥!

[gdtle1]

beautiful. just, so heartbreakingly amazing and guh ;__; how you described everything, and their playful bantering, oh my heart <3

why won't jaejoong go to hospital...why? why not take the risk and have their happiness forever *cries*

loved this so, so, so much, thank you!

[alectorine]

is it really weird that i understand why jae chose not to go to a hospital and instead take off with yunho? it's because he knows his death is inevitable and he would rather spend his last days with the person he loves mostest rather than undergoing treatment that will never work?

this was so sweet at the beginning and then the forever bit came up and i began to have my doubts and then the ending D':. i love the quiet intensity of this story and the way that they want today to be forever

;______;

i'm actually just really glad you didn't include character death in this because i don't think my heart could take it

but i'm sure you would have done it beautifully too