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Oct 16, 2008 17:07

Stories (oo2: o6 drabbles). (yunho/jaejoong)
513 words. angst. G

More prompt-based writing. Snapshots of their lives pulled at inopportune moments, where they are the most vulnerable, most ignorant, most tormented, most honest, most dark, most alive. Quietly, they live.

the clocks sweep away all the hours )

pairing: yunho/jaejoong, writing, fandom: dbsk

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kelseypaige October 17 2008, 01:22:44 UTC
i love how you always deal with the marketing concept that is yunjae, and how the boys could take it, given their marketed personalities. i've seen it done before but never so thoroughly, and it does make me sometimes wonder where the line between reality and make-believe ends, or if it ever does end.

okay, off to read your next oneshot. ilusm for writing and satisfying this old soul ♥

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 03:11:18 UTC
:')) your comments are all I need to keep me fuelled up for writing.

(personally, I think that they have no idea where it ends and starts sometimes. I believe in the marketing concept 100%, but at the same time, I believe that there's something behind it too. kldfajjd hard to explain, :C )

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crux_australis October 17 2008, 01:29:07 UTC
when sm comes barging in through their door and tells them that yunjae is going off the market, because you'd forgotten that.
You seem to like the concept of Yunjae being a (dispensable) marketed concept. And it just hits so close to home that it hurts and twinges in all the right (and wrong) places.

I loved everything, but I think I have a soft spot for 010 because the idea that Yunho would do that just so that Jaejoong would need him is heartbreakingly wrong, yet I find that I could forgive him because he's Yunho. And that's the part that bothers me, because it should be wrong, but I'm finding it hard to think that now.

Your writing is beautiful and poignant, as always. Short, but never lacking. ♥

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 03:15:51 UTC
I doo, I doooooo :'D I'm obsessed with the idea of them knowing the effect yunjae has, them knowing all the fansites, fanwrites, fanarts, (though, that recent video of Jaejoong and his blathering mouth... maybe?) and trying to figure out where they fit in drowned in all of it. ♥

Love is a little bit like that-- wrong in all the right ways and right in all the wrong ones. If Jaejoong doesn't need Yunho, well, he can fix that, can't he? alkdfjalksd sounding psycho, stfu-ing now.

Thank youuu ♥ ♥ ♥ I loved reading your comment (: so thorough and insightful~

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crux_australis October 17 2008, 04:09:33 UTC
There's absolutely no doubt in my mind that each and every idol knows (at least to a general extent) the nature of what effect they have on fans; as well as what pairings are out there (and what are favored) and really. I absolutely believe that every idol has read at least 1 fan fic and seen at least 1 fanart about them.xD ( ... )

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 05:40:35 UTC
Well, we certainly know Jaejoong has ♥ him and his accidental reference to Thorn Year and now to that vid-- even if you didn't end up stumbling onto something pairing related accidentally, I think eventually my curiosity would get the better of me and I'd search it up myself :')

OOOHHhhhh that actually sounds really familiar... it's either a really common theme or I've read it too. I love how twisted it is though ♥ it can get so intense, when you think you're in love with someone because you need them because you have no idea how to live without them. it's a bit mean for the other one though ):

Not inane at all ♥ ♥ And dklfjad awwhhh thank you ;___;~
Your real lj? you have a fake one???

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graveyardgrin October 17 2008, 02:22:14 UTC
This is so heartbreakingly beautiful. I just want to give Jae a big hug. ;~; And Chunnie is so much love!

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 03:16:38 UTC
Do ittt ;_; he probably needs one lkadjfa

bff chunnie is my favourite plot device. hands down. ♥

Mind if I friend you? you've been lovely at commenting plussssss ilu and your icons ;D

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graveyardgrin October 17 2008, 13:54:48 UTC
Sure! I would love to be friends :D
My icons suck TwT but thank you so much for liking them ♥

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florentineeggs October 21 2008, 05:29:09 UTC
no wayyyy, you and your amazing sense of aesthetics :')

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kahel_luna October 17 2008, 02:58:43 UTC
i want to keep your words in my heart like jaejoong's smile. ♥

ps. is it okay to friend this journal?

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 03:17:56 UTC
Oh geez ♥ What a poetic way of putting it~~

Of course! Thank you for asking first though, that's always 100% appreciated (((: it helps me remember you a bit easier ♥

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kahel_luna October 17 2008, 09:44:14 UTC
i believe in mutual friending. it should be two way~

and just like to quote

we grow and grow and grow. / older, taller, stronger. / apart.

this holds a lot of meaning to me, because i am, growing older. growing and growing and growing...and in turn it's causing me to drift away from things and I wonder, does that make me stronger?

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crux_australis October 17 2008, 11:58:43 UTC
Sorry to butt in, but that last sentence of yours has been my concern for these past 2 years, actually. I've always been Peter Pan, and I've been growing up and maturing this past year or so, and I have to wonder (especially when I take trips down memory lane and see how much fun I had as a reckless teen) if this indeed a stronger, better version of me.

"Growing up" gives me mixed feelings, and I think what you said up there just reminded me of it. ^^

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kayjayloves October 17 2008, 03:04:24 UTC
;____; ow, that hurt. i love it though, it's so beautifully raw ♥

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florentineeggs October 17 2008, 03:18:41 UTC
Thank youuuu ♥!

(I read your stuff but I'm too shy to comment, love your most recent yunjae fic.)

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kayjayloves October 17 2008, 13:59:07 UTC
you're very welcome~

kasdkj i love it when good writers are reading my stuff D: and thank you <3 you don't have to be shy! most people appreciate any kind of comment, even if it's just a '♥' xD

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florentineeggs October 21 2008, 05:35:02 UTC
ROFL good writers, you funny funny woman :') or man? or girl? boy? idkkk but you get my meaning
and I know, I know, it's same for me. somehow I'm still always too shy to comment;;

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