I thought so! But, you messed me up for a good while, because I thought, no, Flora doesn't write Sirius, and definitely doesn't write Sirius/Remus, except there are so many telltale Flora things here, like,
"You're hardly in high demand. Also, get off me."
So, I was very unsure if it was you, except when Vi listed the pinch hitters, and then I thought, well, it must be. ANYWAY. Yes, you are completely crazy because it was so not necessary to write so much awesomeness (in pairings, characters, and word count) for me, but I am super happy that you did, because it is totally made of awesome, and WHY AREN'T THERE MORE COMMENTS ON IT? because it is truly made of win, and I love it lots. :) But also I feel bad, 'cuz I thought I'd just get a re-gift that needed a home, or else nothing, which would have been fine, and so, yes, you rule for doing that for me, and all. And on short notice. And SIRIUS.
Also, you need to write him more, because you're good at him, whether or not you want to be. *nods* ♥ !
Ha! I don't know about that. Am off now to try to explain to lovely, smart commenters why the blue hair and charcoal suit were random, meaningless details that betray the rush of the pinch rather than any clever attempt at mindfuck on my part and OMG poor Teddy is so not evil!! *g*
But yes, you win at Valensmut and yay for making Flora write me a Sirius novel!!! ♥
Definition of a Plane was really well done. Very impressive with the rotating pairing's POVs.
The desparation and 'making the best of a bad situation' really came through. I'm glad you didn't wuss out and do the happy ending (though I'm sure if you did it still would have been great). Your ending was perfect, real without being too depressing and it suited the story, it didn't end happily but it ended as well as it could.
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I thought so! But, you messed me up for a good while, because I thought, no, Flora doesn't write Sirius, and definitely doesn't write Sirius/Remus, except there are so many telltale Flora things here, like,
"You're hardly in high demand. Also, get off me."
So, I was very unsure if it was you, except when Vi listed the pinch hitters, and then I thought, well, it must be. ANYWAY. Yes, you are completely crazy because it was so not necessary to write so much awesomeness (in pairings, characters, and word count) for me, but I am super happy that you did, because it is totally made of awesome, and WHY AREN'T THERE MORE COMMENTS ON IT? because it is truly made of win, and I love it lots. :) But also I feel bad, 'cuz I thought I'd just get a re-gift that needed a home, or else nothing, which would have been fine, and so, yes, you rule for doing that for me, and all. And on short notice. And SIRIUS.
Also, you need to write him more, because you're good at him, whether or not you want to be. *nods* ♥ !
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But yes, you win at Valensmut and yay for making Flora write me a Sirius novel!!! ♥
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... just the first one. The second one was all her doing. :-p
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Just thought you should know.
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The desparation and 'making the best of a bad situation' really came through. I'm glad you didn't wuss out and do the happy ending (though I'm sure if you did it still would have been great). Your ending was perfect, real without being too depressing and it suited the story, it didn't end happily but it ended as well as it could.
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