Fic: The Crowing - Katie, Naomi/Emily

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Regrets, Katie often thought, were things not worth having. It was fucking pointless worrying about the past, especially when it certainly must have made sense at the time to do whatever it was you did, otherwise you would never have done it.

There had been so many times when she’d made Emily cry, like if Katie left school without her to walk with

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[doopits]

Ugh, dude. SO GOOD.

I may or may not have read this twice.

Love the small things with big impact (pinky) Katie's thoughts are just so spot on. I also enjoy that you've got the Effy that manipulates people for good(ish) the way she did for Cassie/Sid instead of for evil(ish) with Freddie and Cook. Well. The (ish) stands for "as long as we can ignore Emily's impending broken heart"

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Thanks mate!

Yeah... Effy's not entirely doing the right thing. Probably. She's got her reasons though, and - well, I won't say too much :)

There's always an -ish with Effy!

And, yeah. Poor Emily... I'll try not too crush her too hard! Maybe ;)

[danger_mouse]

Dude, I fucking love this. Have I told you? I think I have, maybe once or twice. But really. I've had this in an open tab for days, waiting for the right moment to read it and just ♥♥ basically.

You have such a mess on your hands, though at the same time I can see you planting seeds for future, uh, fruit? No idea where that sentence was going, but you know what I mean. Or well, I at least think I know what you are meaning, and I love it. I truly do.

Emily is such an emotional character, and expresses her emotions with absolutely no buffer whatsoever (as if Katie stole all that in the womb) so I'm extremely excited (and slightly anxious) about how this will play out when the shit inevitably hits the fan.

This chapter was wonderful. I love the interactions, I love how you've written Effy (yours seems to be the best parts of season 2 & 3 canon Effy), as well of course as how you've written Katie (it's fic like these that remind me how much I fucking love her, particularly when written so well). I'm so looking forward to the rest of

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I think you may have mentioned it ;)

IT'S SUCH A MESS! I love it. Everything has a reason though so, yes, seeds are being planted all over the place. (My brain wants to make that a metaphor for something dirty, like Yeah, Katie's gonna plant a seed all right! *wink* but I'm not too sure it works

[danger_mouse]

*snort* Yeah, Katie's going to plant a seed all right. IN NAOMI'S VAGINA. And then, something about a big hoe. Oh, and gardening tips from Emily?

Whatever, it's too late on my side of the world to turn that into something brilliant. But you know, fill in the gaps and pretend I did!

I really love your Effy, because she seems to be a matured version of season 2 Effy, who was... a mystical problem solver with heart, as opposed to a destructive force wielding drugs and her own genitals to create chaos wherever she went. (I love Effy, don't get me wrong, but I miss her when she was fixing everything)

LOL either way, she's got Katie all up in her grill. I don't know if I feel sorry for Naomi as much as JEALOUSY. But they do work together so well. SO well. Unfeeling Bitch + Unfeeling Bitch = Hot Hot Sense.

♥

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LOLLLL! Brilliant! I'm glad we're on the same wavelength. Sort of. Should I be? Fuck it, I am. I don't care.

Now I've just got the worst/best image of Katie kind of... planting a seed... in Naomi, and Emily just kind of hovering over the top of them going, "No, no - you need to use two fingers... really work them in there" and looking all analytical about it

IM LAME

[carelescreature]

The second, and Katie breathed in sharply as she felt Naomi’s pinkie reach out and begin stroking small but definite lines up and down her thigh, was that if there was the slightest chance that Naomi fancied her back then they were all totally fucked.

JUMPS IN SEAT WITH EXCITEMENT *CUE FANGIRL SCREAM* LMAO I KNOW IM LAME