Oh yeah; the cheating and Emily's emotional manipulation. Whoops ;)
This was lovely in the most horrible way. I've always said the best thing about your work is the emotionally undercurrent that runs through it. It can be all tits and fanny but I've never questioned the love between Ems and Naomi in your work. This is different- heartbreaking and fucked up and destructive. Also, hot. It's a divergence from the rest of your work, and in some ways I think this is the best, because you have to convey a whole gamut of other emotions rather than hot girls who are horny and in love. Like, the part where Emily turns Naomi's face away from her? Way to break my heart, asshole (JK ILU).
Is it weird that I think this came easier to me than when it's just two hot girls in love fucking?! I mean, that's what this is, still, which is what makes it more heartbreaking. They fucking love each other so hard but they've no idea what to do with that right now.
Oh God, yeah - I'm glad you picked up on that bit. It kind of broke my heart a little to write it.
I really loved this bit: "(Maybe that's your problem; you're never able to say no. At least not to the two girls that have offered and that probably makes you a little gayer than you'd previously thought you were.)"..it made me :-)
Guh, you're such a flippin' bitch ninny! That killed my giddy buzz, and I feel like I oughta slap some happy unto thee... with love. <3 Should've sandwiched reading this between non-depressing porn, huh? :P
Totally viable route though(take that Skins!), and as well written as ever.
But yeah, you did manage to destroy my well maintained tipsy time, so that makes you a gangster! That's lovely, isn't it?
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(Big ♥ to you too babes)
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Oh yeah; the cheating and Emily's emotional manipulation. Whoops ;)
This was lovely in the most horrible way. I've always said the best thing about your work is the emotionally undercurrent that runs through it. It can be all tits and fanny but I've never questioned the love between Ems and Naomi in your work. This is different- heartbreaking and fucked up and destructive. Also, hot. It's a divergence from the rest of your work, and in some ways I think this is the best, because you have to convey a whole gamut of other emotions rather than hot girls who are horny and in love. Like, the part where Emily turns Naomi's face away from her? Way to break my heart, asshole (JK ILU).
Srsly, really, really good work
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Is it weird that I think this came easier to me than when it's just two hot girls in love fucking?! I mean, that's what this is, still, which is what makes it more heartbreaking. They fucking love each other so hard but they've no idea what to do with that right now.
Oh God, yeah - I'm glad you picked up on that bit. It kind of broke my heart a little to write it.
Glad you enjoyed (?!) this.
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And you managed to make it hot too. Although I feel bad thinking so, because these girls are hurting so badly :( .
Wonderful ♥
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Should've sandwiched reading this between non-depressing porn, huh? :P
Totally viable route though(take that Skins!), and as well written as ever.
But yeah, you did manage to destroy my well maintained tipsy time, so that makes you a gangster! That's lovely, isn't it?
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