Comments | flirtyfroggy: Carrying a Torch

flirtyfroggy

Carrying a Torch

Dec 14, 2010 22:06

Title: Carrying a Torch
Fandom: The Chronicles of Narnia
Characters/Pairing: Edmund/Caspian
Disclaimer: CS Lewis has been dead for some time. If he were posting this stuff on the internet that would be weird, wouldn't it? Narnia is now owned by his estate, Walden Media & Disney & Fox. Not me.
Summary: Unable to sleep, Caspian takes to wandering ( Read more... )

edmund/caspian, edmund, narnia, slash, caspian

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flirtyfroggy December 14 2010, 23:22:37 UTC

Thank you! :D

It wasn't at all what I intended to write when I decided to write about the torch, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.

liminalliz December 15 2010, 02:46:59 UTC

What a beautiful character study of Caspian! I really enjoyed this!!

flirtyfroggy December 15 2010, 18:40:23 UTC

Thank you! :D

timour December 15 2010, 10:48:13 UTC

Perfect, so very, very perfect. I can just imagine Caspian taking in from the draw on onto the dawn treader...

flirtyfroggy December 15 2010, 18:41:00 UTC

Oooh, perfect eh? Thank you!:D

redsnake05 December 15 2010, 21:13:02 UTC

Caspian is beautifully drawn here. I loved his uncertainty at the beginning, then the way you showed him increasing in confidence and direction. His thoughts and decisions about balance and finding his way were so believable. I really liked it.

flirtyfroggy December 16 2010, 22:20:41 UTC

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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flirtyfroggy December 21 2010, 18:54:51 UTC

Thank you! :D I just thought it was so sweet that Caspian saved the torch and took it with him on the Dawn Treader - I had to write about it.