A Scotch for the Road - Part 17

[flighty_dreams]

TITLE: A Scotch for the Road - Part 17
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: Slavefic. NC-17.  F/m.
WORD COUNT: 4,390 (this chapter)/ story so far (over 50K)
SUMMARY: A slave enduring a party encounters more than he bargained for.
NOTES: Thanks to aurila for her assistance.
FEEDBACK: Always welcome, even if it's just to say that you read it.

Comments

[fran_fic]

Not trusting Daddy Dear... He's up to no good, mark my words! -.- And Charlie... Who wants a Charlie when there's a Brett! Not me :-) Well, it will be interesting to see what Daddy is up to, and what will happen at that big event.

I like how the chapter is parted up in one, more plot-driven, part, and one, more "domestic", part (even though I am sure there are details in that part, too, that will prove to be important later on for the plot). I like, in any case, to read about these glimpses of Jenna's and Brett's every day life.

Aw, I'm starting to like Ty a lot - such a dear :-) I guess he got a bit more than he bargained for with this friendship - sort of getting caught in between, with big potential of being out of favor both with his master and with Jenna if he makes a wrong move. Poor thing. Though I don't think Jenna would ever be cruel to him, but he doesn't know that for sure.

Lovely update! :-)

[flighty_dreams]

Hehe, exactly... Brett > Charlie. Was there ever a doubt?

Thanks, yeah I got to mix the best of both worlds here. We are suckers for the domestic scenes, aren't we? :-)

Lol ya, the poor boy didn't realize what he was in for. :D He is cute though, even in his (understandable) cluelessness of what Jenna is really like.

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[fran_fic]

Not in my mind :-D

I am a sucker for domestic scenes, I really am :-) Maybe because, when reading, sometimes you want to read stuff that you can distance yourself from (things you'd never ever want to see in real life), and sometimes you want something you could imagine yourself in instead - and I guess the quiet, everyday, domestic scenes fits that a bit :-)

But Brett will set him straight on that? Will we actually read what Brett says to him, or will that only be implied?

I already read the Ty groveling scenes several times :-D (I'm not at all obsessed with such things, nooo...)

[aurila]

Lol, poor Ty is getting more attention than he's aware of :)

[dramagirl007]

Another awesome update and right on time. Been itching for another chapter to any one of your stories. ;) Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

[flighty_dreams]

Glad to hear it. Just sorry I had to make you all wait so long. But the chapters will keep coming, I promise. I'll never just totally give up on the stories. Thanks for reading.

[bootsie1975]

I'm always glad to see that you've updated. I don't trust Daddy Dollar either. A man with money and a reputation to protect, not someone to cross...in any manner!

[flighty_dreams]

Yeah, I can't blame you.. not even Jenna seems to trust her own father! Thanks for reading.

[tommyglitter]

I just found this story and I find it addictive. I love the layers and complexities of what's going on; everybody having their own personal interest. So life-like.

I don't trust daddy, and I fear for Brett. What will he do when he knows Jenna isn't there to protect him?

Yes, lovely story you have here! I'm looking forward to more!

[flighty_dreams]

Thanks so much. Always happy to hear from a new reader. :-)

Not sure what you mean about Jenna not being there, but yeah Brett seems to have bumps in the road still ahead for him. It would be a boring story otherwise, wouldn't it?

Thanks for commenting.

[tommyglitter]

Jenna won't be there, at home, when she goes on her 'date'. Dad will know Brett is alone, and it seems like a set up for big trouble.

True, nothing but pleasant times would be a boring story. I do love happy endings, tho. Good luck with the next chapter. I'm looking forward to it.

[flighty_dreams]

Oh that. I really couldn't say. :-)

Yeah, not that I'll declare to always write happy endings (I have to explore both extremes and other things in between at some point) but in my heart of hearts I'm a sucker for happy endings too.

Thanks, glad to hear it!

[tuawahine]

Wow, either I really haven't checked my f-list in forever or I somehow missed this.

Interesting update. It seems a lot of things are being set in motion here. Though being me, what I mostly want to know is how Brett knows when to open the door. Does he see her coming through the window or something? ;)

Also, poor Ty, caught in the middle like that.

[flighty_dreams]

Lol no worries, I apparently missed comments... for months. Oops. Sorry for the late response.

Yeah, it is a set up chapter, pretty much. Brett's secret is safe... for now. :-)

Yeah, not a good place to be! Ever.