Rip us out at the seams (Sam/Dean and Dean/OMCs, 7500 words, nc-17)

[fleshflutter]

There's a post following this one in which I say thank you to some people for being utterly wonderful while I have been such an atrocious LJ friend. In the meantime...

Commissioned by giandujakiss, through Sweet Charity. I do hope you'll like it, and thank you for the wonderful prompt! Huge love and thanks to rivers_bend for tidying it up for me. <333

Rip us out at the

Comments

[layne67]

OMGOMGOMG

*reads*

[layne67]

Guh. That was gorgeous. And these two parts in particular cut like a knife - Sam's drunken jibe on Dean and his Daddy issues, and this "Stop taking care of you?" Dean's voice is wintry. "Fine. Guess you got Ruby for that now anyway.". That hurt in Metamorphosis, when Dean was packing up all ready to leave, and it hurt here.

You're awesome.

[fleshflutter]

Oh I am so grateful to you for reading and for leaving such absolutely awesome feedback! You really are very kind and wonderful. <3333

[fleshflutter]

I had huge doubts about how this had worked out and your help just made it all so so much better. Thank you ever so much for sharing so much of your awesomeness with me. ♥ <3

[dev_earl]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. It's half past midnight and I have a LOT of writing to do on my own but you don't expect me not to read this NOW, do you? *runs off to read*

[dev_earl]

Okay. Honest to god, only YOU could make me shudder and flinch and cry and my heart swell triple its size in one go. ONLY YOU, you hear me? There were a bunch of lines that grabbed at me GOOD and I'd recite them to you, but it doesn't feel right. Feels like I should recite this whole thing back to you because I loved every teeny tiny bit of this.

Damnit, woman. You broke me and I love you and I just. *worships at your shrine*

That first kiss, though. That's my favorite yet for these boys. It feels like them, the tenderness in the midst of desperation and fear. You wrote them RIGHT and GOOD and PERFECT.

ILU!!! ♥♥♥

[fleshflutter]

Oh I think you're such an incredible writer yourself, and so to have you leave such brilliant feedback makes me all mushy! Thank you so so much, sweetheart. <333333

[fleshflutter]

Oooh that's a really cool way of looking at Sam's shift in attitude - thank you for pointing that out! And I am delighted this worked for you, my lovely! Thank you so so much for reading! <3

[balefully]

PISFKM:WTGKP:SMGLTWPTOGM:LSG:OUNASUFLHIUFNLNL!!!!!!!!!!!!!1qwsd

SAM/DEAN HOOKERFIC. FROM YOU! IT IS LIKE ALL MY DREAMS HAVE COME TRUE!

"You're all I have," Sam says. "And you're selling it to other people. Everything left is mine. You hear me? It belongs to me."

NNNNGH OH MY GOD. SAMMY. My heart breaks and I get all shallow-breathed at the same time.

And then I was going to quote a line from the whole Sam-fucking-Dean-on-his-enormous-cock-in-the-alley scene, but just. I COULD NOT PICK ONE OH MY GOD HOW SICK AND WRONG DOES IT MAKE ME THAT THAT IS JUST ABOUT THE HOTTEST THING. EVER. IN THE UNIVERSE. HNNNGHd,mwyrstdgf.

And then the happy ending! *_*!

[fleshflutter]

Eeeee! Your feedback makes me very VERY happy indeed! I am thrilled that you enjoyed it! Thank you ever so much for reading and being so kind, my lovely! ♥ ♥ ♥