Rip us out at the seams (Sam/Dean and Dean/OMCs, 7500 words, nc-17)

[fleshflutter]

There's a post following this one in which I say thank you to some people for being utterly wonderful while I have been such an atrocious LJ friend. In the meantime...

Commissioned by giandujakiss, through Sweet Charity. I do hope you'll like it, and thank you for the wonderful prompt! Huge love and thanks to rivers_bend for tidying it up for me. <333

Rip us out at the

Comments

[giandujakiss]

Oh, this is spectacular. I love Sam's feeling about Dean, and how he just simmers until he finally boils over. And how Dean kept saying he didn't have anything more to sell - oh, Dean!! And the scene from Mystery Spot just about killed me.

This was exactly what I needed - thank you so much!

[fleshflutter]

Oh I am very very happy that you liked it, darling. Thank you ever so much for buying me and giving me such a wonderful prompt to work to. ♥

[sadcypress]

"You're all I have," Sam says. "And you're selling it to other people. Everything left is mine. You hear me? It belongs to me."

YES. YES. THAT RIGHT THERE.

[fleshflutter]

Eeee! Thank you so so much for reading, my lovely! :)

[callistosh65]

Wow. So well done. Both boys are brilliantly drawn here - Sammy just.. comes into his own here, doesn't he?? He makes me shiver, and Dean makes me ache. And there's Mystery Spot too! Thank you for this.

[fleshflutter]

Oh I'm ever so pleased it worked for you! Thank you so so much for reading and commenting! :)

[linnet_melody]

You know, it's times like this, when my chest is still aching and sore from holding my breath (and even when I breathe again, it's still aching somewhere deep) that I wonder how you see life around you.

I wonder about the difference in our neurons and how your analyzing of optical input is so alien and strange from what I see. I wonder about what you ~think~ about what you see and how you react to it in life.

Your writing reflects your perceptions, and both are absolutely amazing. Thank you for this lovely piece.

[fleshflutter]

That's really really kind feedback to get. I am absolutely thrilled that you reacted to this piece in the way you did. Thank you ever so much for reading and for leaving such a wonderful comment. <333

[larienelengasse]

This hurt. But it was also beautiful. Very well done, my friend.

[fleshflutter]

Oh thank you so very very much! I'm ever so pleased it worked for you! <33333