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flash_indie

fic: there is no such place

Jun 08, 2010 22:14

There is No Such Place
Firefly. Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee. R. 2,704 words.
Post-BDM

( She curls back inside herself like she did when she was thirteen and Nandi told her she wouldn’t steal any hearts if hers was being held in open fingers, ripe for the plucking. )

the country inside my head, firefly

Comments 23

stars_inthe_sky June 8 2010, 13:09:43 UTC

YES. Spot-on, a wonderful capture of everyone (and these two especially, of course) mending. So in character, and the structure suits this perfectly.

flash_indie June 8 2010, 22:34:03 UTC

Thank you so much! I haven't really written in the fandom properly before, so I'm glad that you feel it's in character. :)

charlie_bz June 8 2010, 19:03:50 UTC

I love this story!

flash_indie June 8 2010, 22:34:19 UTC

Thanks so much!

vivacious_dan June 8 2010, 22:29:19 UTC

Omg, that was amazing! ♥

flash_indie June 8 2010, 22:34:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

rocketgirl2 June 9 2010, 00:15:45 UTC

Oh, that's gorgeous. Really. I do not think I have words to express how much I loved this...

The two of them break my heart. They really do.

Such a lyrical piece, and very, very Inara. I hope to see more from you in this fandom!

flash_indie June 9 2010, 22:22:10 UTC

Thank you so much! I've really enjoyed writing it, so hopefully I will post a couple more things. :)

flighty_dreams June 9 2010, 01:40:55 UTC

Great story. I really loved how you captured how broken they all were after the events of the BDM. I think it must've gone something like this, taking so long for them to all heal.

flash_indie June 9 2010, 22:23:35 UTC

Thanks so much. It must have been so hard to heal after BDM and I'm so happy I managed to capture some of it for you. :)