swarthmore essay

Nov 09, 2005 12:31

if you have the time, please edit or make comments on my essay. it needs a lot of work still, its far from perfect. please help me ( Read more... )

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squeakle November 9 2005, 12:29:30 UTC
I won't be much of a help, but I'll try my best ( ... )

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redazalea November 10 2005, 16:36:49 UTC
haven't you already turned the essay in???

anyhow, the thing that colleges really hook themselves onto is how much do you really know and love about the college. GO MORE INTO THAT. seriously. it's nice but not nearly as detailed as it could be. maybe name a few classes you want to take, imagine a weekend excursion with your new Swarthmore friends, take a mental walk through the streets of Philadelphia and the King of Prussia Mall and maybe compare it to the serene quiet of Swarthmore.

don't worry yourself with the word limit; going a hundred over is not that big of a deal if you have a stellar essay.

I HOPE YOU GET IN DARLING!

*tears* I should have applied UPENN early. garrr. i had a really good UPENN essay. e-mail me if you want to see it.

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